A Squeeze Page For My Client - Need some inputs!

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Hello Warriors,

Before I send a report to my client, I want to hear first your thoughts with this capture page I created for her, Real Estate Wheeler Dealer

She was the one who provided the contents.

Feel free to share your thoughts on this.

Thanks for at least reading my thread.

Your inputs will be highly appreciated.

Thanks,
Louie Tugas
#client #inputs #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author CustomDevo
    Hi Louie,

    Looking good so far man, just one suggestion, you might want to add another opt-in form in the end of the page so visitors don't have to scroll up if they interested to subscribe.

    Cheers
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    • Profile picture of the author magiclouie
      Originally Posted by CustomDevo View Post

      Hi Louie,

      Looking good so far man, just one suggestion, you might want to add another opt-in form in the end of the page so visitors don't have to scroll up if they interested to subscribe.

      Cheers
      Yeah, you are spot-on CustomDevo.

      Thanks for this valuable suggestion.
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    • Profile picture of the author connorbringas
      Originally Posted by CustomDevo View Post

      Hi Louie,

      Looking good so far man, just one suggestion, you might want to add another opt-in form in the end of the page so visitors don't have to scroll up if they interested to subscribe.

      Cheers
      I agree with this poster, in addition to that you could also think about adding in a javascript to have the opt-in form follow you as you scroll down the page. Just something to think about.
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  • Profile picture of the author mgreener
    1. In My FREE Real Estate Investing
    Course You Will Discover:
    looks like a subhead, make it a bit more prominent, make it stick out and be the first thing people read. Also consider improving the actual copy of the headline "Discover the 2 things you absolutely must do in Real estate…" or something that grabs a bit more.

    2. Split up the bullet points, consider leaving half where they are and the other half somewhere below to break up the LONG text.

    3. In Firefox the right hand side opt in box has a white background which makes reading the text impossible (do testing in browsers to make sure it is correct)

    4. Reduce the width of the LONG text and try to break it up more.

    5. Make both testimonial boxes the same as far as style (headlines same font, size, color, etc.)

    6. Consider placing one of the testimonials higher up on the page to help break up that LONG text

    7. Add that extra opt in box near the bottom again

    Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author magiclouie
    Thanks for the input Warriors.

    My client just screwed up the squeeze page so I need to fix it first.
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  • Profile picture of the author magiclouie
    I have now fixed it.

    I viewed the site in these browsers:

    IE
    Chrome
    Firefox
    Rockmelt

    and the site looks the same.

    I really appreciate all your inputs.

    Cheers,
    Louie Tugas
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    • Profile picture of the author Simiv68
      I didn't see it before the changes but it sure looks good. Makes me want to opt-in and I'm not even interested in real estate investing. Nice work.
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  • Profile picture of the author savvy linguist
    I like the cleanliness and the neatness of the page. Sometimes, simplicity is the best.
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