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Hey guys we just launched and want an HONEST review of our site and please we HONESTLY are in beta and launched it Dec 2nd but looking for Warrior Expertise to IMPROVE..

YT Explosion Code

Thanks for all you do warriors and this is just our 2nd project so we are growing but NEVER DONE so we need to improve and innovate, what better place to ask than the warrior forum..
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  • Profile picture of the author Gary77
    Originally Posted by leadmonster View Post

    Hey guys we just launched and want an HONEST review of our site and please we HONESTLY are in beta and launched it Dec 2nd but looking for Warrior Expertise to IMPROVE..

    YT Explosion Code

    Thanks for all you do warriors and this is just our 2nd project so we are growing but NEVER DONE so we need to improve and innovate, what better place to ask than the warrior forum..
    Yes like it a lot - very professional the video is of top quality and very well spoken presenters and very attractive which helps a lot with sales. With the graphic presentation, I'm still not sure about the nuclear explosions...it seems a little too over the top or may come across as a little too pro-war or destructive rather than explosive, may dynamite sticks going off with cash flying everywhere? - its up to you but that's how I would do it. The logo is good though.

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  • Great Website, and have you have good opening headline too.
    You could do more for other headline, it doesn't look good if you just give them yellow bg.
    and make the faqs border lighter, and again, change the yellow background..,
    note : bottom part is missing some background?
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  • Profile picture of the author znan
    I like it leadmonster great video btw, very well done...

    As Red Shield said, at the bottom of the sales letter there's a bit of background missing.

    I'd also change the yellow boxes/backgrounds, you can work a little bit more on them, and make them more visually appealing. The yellow color is a bit agressive, makes it hard to read and focus on the text.

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  • Profile picture of the author duvik
    I agree with the ccomment on the nuclear explosions... they're a bit over the top and detract from focus on the logo which is your brand. The logo should stand out more than the background if ya know what I mean.

    I also agree that the yellow boxes could be toned down and improved. It's a long ass sales page though and the designer probably got a case of the 'f' its. I actually had to build a long ass sales page today and towards the end zone felt the same.

    And speaking of long... God it is... The chick is hot though. Good eye candy but the intro pitch is really wordy. It takes forever to get to the meat.

    I loaded this on my phone too... It's soooo long... I ended up skipping over 3/4 of it. I started to go cross eyed.

    Finally... There are some minor typos in what I did read... but I'm a grammar Nazi and most folk that would read all of that and actually purchase it are probably not going to notice.

    Other than that... tight work. I like the use of a hot chick as your dupe. Just thinking I was reading what she said helped me trudge through even though I know it's all an illusion. Good call on her.
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  • Profile picture of the author carltonman
    Personally, I would like to see a better image resolution in the banner. But this will sure affect loading time.

    And one more thing.
    When you scroll all the way to the bottom, the border line is broken at the level of the links in the footer.
    This part of the page should be perfect because a "buy now" button is there.

    But overall, a nice marketing site.
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  • Profile picture of the author hemender
    Nice website made by you. But in my view you can add menu in header part and increase the font size in footer area so that user can easily see it and easily navigate to whole website. Apart from this add meta tags to the website.
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  • Profile picture of the author therealcarmen
    Just wondering if anyone has experience with the actual YT explosion product?
    Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author sham2
    Very attractive and eye catching website. I like your team hard work. The video is awesome. The first banner image is really appreciable. One thing i noted that it the last the red line is broken In my opinion best solution for that is remove all links from here and adjust it in footer. It will be look awesome.
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  • Profile picture of the author taylerhughes
    I don't understand why people still make websites like this?

    Surely you lose a lot of potential visitors due to negative connotations associated with it because of all the scam websites and useless ebooks.

    100% you would be better off with a more modern one page design.
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  • Profile picture of the author gerardojv
    Typical Landing Page design, nothing out the the ordinary. Besides the common landing page design, very good promotional video and logo.
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  • Profile picture of the author Anton Yulianto
    I like your team hard work. The video is awesome.
    professional the video is of top quality and very well spoken presenters and very attractive which helps a lot with sales
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