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Being Muscular is Hurting you?

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In this case Yes,

Paying for all those gym membership, for being fit and strength, what I get at the end is a muscular bulky body which is not able to do mobility work, I lost all my flexibility. I can't control my body and My balance is terrible which makes me so bad at athletic stuff.

And at end as I started to grow my older my muscles and joints get ache.

I lose flexibility in them, and all I am good for is picking-up heavy weights.

**If this is what you are feeling from your GYM experience then Its totally hurting You.**

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