Another critique - some practice
Just some practice. The email copy is based on an actual event and facts I grabbed from the site. I did not list the names of those speaking at this conference to keep it very generic.
Objective of the copy: Get readers to purchase tickets to event and upsell to the VIP lecture.
Subject line: Mike, Propel your Real Estate career in to overdrive
Body of letter:
Dear Mike,
Whether you're a new or seasoned agent, launch your career in to overdrive with this very special 2-day event.
• Connect with top influences in person
• Learn from real estate's finest
• Find out industry secrets to more sales
• Network with buyers and lenders from all over
• Build new contacts and relationships
Join us in San Diego at the Hilton Bayfront October 12-14 at the XYZ Summit 2018.
This is your chance to get yourself to the next level.
Learn what it takes to be a business owner FAST and discover the secrets that were mastered by professionals such as...
• Professional speaker 1
• Professional speaker 2
• Professional speaker 3
• Professional speaker 4
Click the banner below to secure your tickets NOW!
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Regards,
Michael Brian
P.S. If you secure your tickets now, you'll have the opportunity of a lifetime to gain VIP access on October 12th ONLY. There are only 12 more seats left!
Thanks in advance for the feedback!
Mike
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