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    Facebook ad critique

    Delta223 in Offline Marketing

    The cabinet maker client is going for orders not leads/list building. Am I on the right track? Jeff Miller does like 80% of the ad as a big bold text ... [read more]

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    Please Critique My Letter For Contacting Influencers On YouTube & Instagram!

    cpacashman in Copy Writing

    Hi Everyone, I'm going to be contacting Influencer's on YouTube & Instagram to get them to promote my Art Clothing store for a 50/50 split on the commissions. Here's my ... [read more]

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    Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

    Hi, I'm developing an online discussion platform. Initially the target customer/user group will be non-profits looking to improve people's lives / help people / change the world. With that in ... [read more]

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    Critique My Postcard

    eccj in Offline Marketing

    Okay Forum. I decided today I want to send a postcard out to, obviously, try and make more money. It's from a JVish deal I put together that hasn't gone ... [read more]

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    critique my website headline?

    Matthew North in Copy Writing

    Hi guys, would you be able to help me refine my headline a bit? I think it's okay, but could be better. The only way people will find this site ... [read more]

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    Confusing, syntax-abusing text lost in poor layout seeks help

    Bjarne Eldhuset in Copy Writing

    Hi! I've created a website called Vumiu.com. I would like some feedback on the copy. Is it clear enough what the site is about? I do not want to make ... [read more]

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    Another newbie for your critique, tips on promoting my new blog and affiliate products to promote.

    Hi guys, I have 14 posts on my new blog right now. Wanted to wait until I have 50+ posts up and running to do any promotion. But realised that ... [read more]

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    Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

    workflow in Copy Writing

    Please critique following sales page. All ideas, suggestions, constructive criticisms, or angry excuses to vent appreciated. Sales Letter

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    I didn't want to post this, but: Critique my site.

    TheTing in Internet Marketing

    This is my first attempt to do affiliate marketing. I picked up a product from CB, created my webstite (https://manifestationoflife.com/) and started writing content like a madman. It's been 1,5 ... [read more]

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    Looking for a copy critique (this is rough draft) so tear it apart

    jukeboxhero in Copy Writing

    Just looking for advice on a rough draft I've put together for a new product I'm promoting... Yes it's old school (non VSL) but my old school non vsl's are ... [read more]

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    Website Critique Please

    Jeffery in

    Hi, In my lame attempt to redesign my PIPS site would you offer any suggestions please? The objective is to use the same or similar color scheme on the site ... [read more]

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    Copy critique request

    perryny in Copy Writing

    Hi Copywriters, I've been working on a product for a while now, and I could use some help with the sales copy, if anyone is interested in helping out. The ... [read more]

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    Creating a compelling call to action for post card - critique needed

    MitchHoward in Copy Writing

    I'm creating a post card to send out to small businesses. The offer is a web and search marketing custom video analysis - this specific list is going to contractors. ... [read more]

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    Brand new here - Also looking for a critique

    Copylifemike in Copy Writing

    Hello everyone! Since learning about the existence of copywriting nearly 2 months ago, I have become an internet info junkie. Learning all I can get my hands on along with ... [read more]

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    Give Me Critique On My Idea Of Building A Email Marketing Sales Funnel

    onpointinfo in Email Marketing

    Hi everyone... I am involved in a home business that deals with network marketing, so the product I sell is home based business opportunity to people who are looking to ... [read more]

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    Landing Page Critique

    CashFlowJunkie in Copy Writing

    Hello all, This is my first real attempt at using an IM Sales funnel. I've been reading and watching videos for a couple of months. I have a small ad ... [read more]

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    [Critique My Weight Loss Copy] Fat Burning Soup Recipes

    link8 in Copy Writing

    Just updated my page http://fatburningsouprecipes.com/ what do you guys think? Should i move the testimonials further down the copy? or place is okay? Thanks in advance!

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    Another critique - some practice

    Copylifemike in Copy Writing

    The following copy is based on email. Just some practice. The email copy is based on an actual event and facts I grabbed from the site. I did not list ... [read more]

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    Can you critique my new eCommerce store?

    jrodefeld in eCommerce

    Okay, so I'm finally getting set to jump into ecommerce after sitting on the fence for a year or so. I've been reading a lot about others who have successfully ... [read more]

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    Critique my script for Lead Generation to businesses

    Kevin Dee in Offline Marketing

    Ok so I have a process in place where I can provide leads to businesses through PPC and FB ads. They are high quality leads and that side of it ... [read more]

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    Content Critique - Youtube Videos that stand out..

    Casey Neistat is the greatest most interesting vlogger ever. Puddy Pie was one of the first introduce gaming as a means of watchable entertainment. What could I have done in ... [read more]

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    [COPYWRITING] "Made My Jaw Drop When The PayPal Notifications Started To Come Through In Full Force"

    BrianMcLeod in

    ATTENTION: Extremely Limited Offer for First 10 Action-Taking Warriors FINALLY - Affordable Expert Copy Consultation from a 20 Year Veteran Direct-Response Pro with a $100,000,000+ Track Record If you’ve always ... [read more]

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    Help me convert - critique my page

    Roscoe4 in Internet Marketing

    So I have been lurking here and I decided to just jump into internet marketing. My plan is to start a lead gen business. I want to sell leads to ... [read more]

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    Critique my copy - More Leads from Your Website

    zoro in Offline Marketing

    I would be grateful if you guys could Critique my script copy for - "More Leads from Your Website" I'm wanting to get local business owners into my sales funnel ... [read more]