#critique

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    Critique My Marketing Blog

    Hello Warriorforum, I hope I chose the appropriate forum to post this. I just recently opened up a blog about digital marketing and I post there once every day as ... [read more]

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    Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

    Hi, I'm developing an online discussion platform. Initially the target customer/user group will be non-profits looking to improve people's lives / help people / change the world. With that in ... [read more]

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    Landing Page Critique

    CashFlowJunkie in Copy Writing

    Hello all, This is my first real attempt at using an IM Sales funnel. I've been reading and watching videos for a couple of months. I have a small ad ... [read more]

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    I didn't want to post this, but: Critique my site.

    TheTing in Internet Marketing

    This is my first attempt to do affiliate marketing. I picked up a product from CB, created my webstite (https://manifestationoflife.com/) and started writing content like a madman. It's been 1,5 ... [read more]

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    Can Someone Critique My Website, I Cant Convert My Traffic Into Sales

    cselectronics in eCommerce

    New to the E-Commerce game and am trying all different methods to drive traffic to the site but even today ive had 105 unique visitors via Google Ad's & Facebook ... [read more]

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    Critique my Cold Calling Script for SEO

    Disclaimer: i been a member here, and i haven't cold called or did anything for my business in a while because i was busy handling something else in my personal ... [read more]

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    Sales Letter Critique Pls.

    jessegilbert in Copy Writing

    Feedback pls. Went to direct response format. A+’s AND $$’s Brainstorm Pro Writing Software For School & Real Life. |

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    [Critique My Weight Loss Copy] Fat Burning Soup Recipes

    link8 in Copy Writing

    Just updated my page http://fatburningsouprecipes.com/ what do you guys think? Should i move the testimonials further down the copy? or place is okay? Thanks in advance!

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    Please critique my first dropshipping website -

    venk1986 in eCommerce

    Hi, I have recently developed my dropshipping site(www.butterjar.com). I did some Facebook marketing but end up with less visitors. I am still working on the right target audience. Meanwhile, if ... [read more]

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    Insurance EDDM Critique

    Jayson L in Offline Marketing

    I am working on a postcard to market to local residents through EDDM and wanted to get some feedback on the design. I am focusing on home insurance, auto insurance ... [read more]

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    My one call close seo script.. CRITIQUE IT nicely (JASON AND JOHN especially)

    MaxwellB in Offline Marketing

    I normally never single out specific warriors in thread titles (I don't know, makes me feel like a noob haha) but I have to because I know these guys AND ... [read more]

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    Critique my script for Lead Generation to businesses

    Kevin Dee in Offline Marketing

    Ok so I have a process in place where I can provide leads to businesses through PPC and FB ads. They are high quality leads and that side of it ... [read more]

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    Help me convert - critique my page

    Roscoe4 in Internet Marketing

    So I have been lurking here and I decided to just jump into internet marketing. My plan is to start a lead gen business. I want to sell leads to ... [read more]

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    Please Critique My First Attempt At Copy.

    This is for a flower shop. At the moment their web Home/About page is a few lines of who they are and what they do but not much about what ... [read more]

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    [Critique request] Please give me you expert opinion on how to improve this ad copy.

    Hi guys, I will be launching a new SEO WordPress plugin, soon, and I wanted to make sure that my ad copy is on point... Can you please take a ... [read more]

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    Brutally Critique My Copy, Please Use Live Bullets

    Imre in Copy Writing

    I'm working with a computer scientist who developed an ingenious methodology ... rather than tell you and spoil the first reaction... Please critique... the email directs them to his landing ... [read more]

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    [Need A Critique] Clothing Store Website Sales Letter

    Jessica S in Copy Writing

    This is my third draft, but, I feel like it is missing something. I know its better than the last one I wrote. Let me know what you think. Constructive ... [read more]

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    Constructive critique [UPDATED] [THIRD ATTEMPT]

    zth91 in Copy Writing

    I'd like to say thank you to all of you for your help so far, it really does mean alot to me. Becoming a really good copywriter is a goal ... [read more]

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    Critique my optin page please

    prefamous in Email Marketing

    I need some pointers on my optin page , please critique my page and provide to improve optin rate. https://reymarketing.sendlane.com/vi...iate-marketing

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    Critique Request, House Painting

    maximus242 in Copy Writing

    Hi, Please critique my copy, attached in pdf in this post. Muchas Gracias

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    Critique Requested (thank you in advance)

    JamesDLayton in Copy Writing

    British Make-Up Artist Swears An Oath That Her Secret Is No Witchcraft Beauty isn't cheap let's face it. Seriously it isn't cheap and it's getting increasingly expensive by the year. ... [read more]

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    Lawn Service Flyer - Help me Critique!

    I came to this forum last year for some advice from the marketing guru's here. I got some excellent and useful input and it turned out to be a great ... [read more]

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    [HELP!] Critique my sales page PLEEEZE!

    [HELP!] Critique my sales page PLEEEZE! Hi fellow warriors, I fiiiiiinally completed my first info product and I fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinally finished my sales page, and I'd really appreciate some feedback. I've ... [read more]

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    The sheer number of critique requests is getting ridiculous

    Mark Andrews in Copy Writing

    There was a time when the CW forum actually served it's real purpose, for copywriters to enjoy quality discussions about copywriting. Sure there was a lot of banter flying back ... [read more]