I recently wrote a DR copy for a "cat furniture protector" and drove traffic to it by google ads.
I got under 1% conversion rate.
I wanted to get some opinions as to whats the problem with my copy? Why are people reading it but not buying?
Here's parts of the copy (the actual copy is a bit longer but I've included all the sections here):
What To Do If Your Cat Is Ruining Your Furniture And You Don't Want To Declaw? |
Here's How You Can Instantly Train Your Cat To Stop Scratching Your Furniture
If you own a cat and your cat has started scratching your furniture you need to know about this simple solution that can easily and quickly fix your problem.
But, first you have to understand why your cat does what he does.
It feels good to him!
Cats are hardwired to scratch and claw, scratching the furniture is a reward for them. That's why...
"Training" your cat not to do it will never work!
It's just a waste of your time, the reward far outweighs any sort of punishment for your cat. So he will keep doing it.
So, what should you do?
It's simple. You need to remove the reward.
How can you do that?
Well, you can't...
But the amazing solution you're gonna learn about today will do that for you.
And it will do it immediately.
The moment you use it is the moment your scratch worries are gone!
Other than that...
This solution works 100% of the time. In fact...
It's Guaranteed to Work!
(extended text removed by mod to provide sample copy without promotion of specific product.)
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