I was wondering if you could give me a few minutes of your time to critique my new sales letter for a product that is in the affiliate marketing niche - particularly promoting physical products on Amazon.
Dan Brock's Profitzon - Amazon Affiliate Marketing Revealed
I need a critique of the hook(first few windows of the sales letter - up until the search engine traffic screen shot), as well as the closer for the sales letter.
Does the hook pull you in enough to keep you reading further, or is it too cluttered?
I feel like those are my two are the weakest parts of my letter(and also the most important), so please tear it apart.
Particularly, does it convey the message that this is an affiliate marketing course that teaches physical product affiliate marketing.
Any suggestions, problems, ideas, feel free to tell me. Eyes and ears are open!
Thank you for reading/reviewing!