How I write copy (i.e. the Secret Life of a Copywriter.)

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Hi all,

In a recent conversation I had with one of the moderators, Brian McLeod, he encouraged and inspired me to share a bit about what I know and how I do what I do.


He thought it might be helpful to folks.


As you may or may not know, I fly under-the-radar about 99% of the time. Bit of a hermit, a recluse, I am.


Today I am going to divulge here a bit on how I write copy. I hope it's useful to you...


In the upper echelons of NLP, there is a concept known as "going first."


Richard Bandler taught me this what seems like decades ago. (Like Gary Halbert with copywriting, Richard is like "the" god of NLP.)


Basically what "going first" means is that if you want someone to feel an emotion like "love," you have to "go first" and feel love--FIRST. And communicate from that "space."


From a copywriter's perspective, what this means is, not just thinking or writing about the emotion you want you reader to feel in some abstract, cerebral sort of way--but feeling it.


Like REALLY feeling it. Digging deep. Then recording somehow because what you come up with will be brilliant.


Most copywriters, and rightly so, research and wordsmith and labor over their work. I do that too.


But what's more valuable and far more fulfilling to me is writing "from the heart." Shutting off that analytical part of my brain just for a while and just relishing in the joy of an emotion I want to invoke or provoke and communicating from it.


You can do this too.


(By the way, I'll bet there's some great stuff on the web about the most important emotions which people use to buy. But that's a different topic.)


Here's what happens when you do.


You lose the "manipulative" element that so pervades most less-than-effective copywriting efforts. You know what I am talking about. Where it's obvious that someone is "selling" you. Readers for the most part push back on that type of copywriting these days.


Your work will be far more original. Because it will be YOU--not a swipe of a swipe of a swipe. You just have to trust yourself and your emotions. Your work will ooze with integrity.


When you "jump into the pool" of an emotion you want to instill and/or describe, you will be amazed how more effective your copywriting will be. You'll ratchet up your copywriting skills 10X at least.


Let me give you a couple of other related ideas:


1. Work only with one emotion at a time. Don't dilute. Don't hold back. Cut loose. "UNLEASH" as I say. You can always edit/cut the "heavy stuff" later.


2. It may help to think in terms of a story or experience in your past where that emotion was overwhelmingly present. Method actors do this. For instance, actors can cry almost on demand because they are able to instantly dredge up a memory they can cry about.


So THIS is how I write copy. I work with the raw, unfiltered emotions people have or they want to have, when it comes to products or services they want in their life.


I don't know if this post is helpful or not. But if it is, let me know and I'll share more in the future.


- Rick Duris


PS: There is only one downside to this strategy of "going first." It's fatiguing. At least to me. It drains me. Every day I "spill my guts."


But at the same time, I rest my head each night knowing I have done my best work.
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  • Profile picture of the author wcmylife
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    • Profile picture of the author Tasso Pepi
      Hey Rick...

      Great post...

      It is so true, that we need to write from the heart. I am reading a book By Stephen Booker, called "The 7 Basic Plots".

      The book is about how we have a subconcious connection to storytelling and the most successful books, movies, sales copy somehow follow this layout of story telling...
      It is too great to go into here, the book is huge..haha

      Plus how we from cave man time have always been seduced by stories, how else would they have kept themselves amused without tv :p

      But very interesting, i like the way you look at things, we should get in touch sometime i would love to talk about this more.

      Great post....

      Tas
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      • Profile picture of the author Paul Hooper-Kelly
        Hey Rick,

        That's a wonderful post! Thanks for sharing your knowledge.

        I must confess I didn't know about "going first", although I do something similar - as does Clayton Makepeace, I believe.

        Mine springs from the years I spent in face to face selling.

        So, once I've researched the product, I imagine myself with my ideal prospect, who happens to be a buddy, sitting in a bar (where else?).

        And I'm telling him, with great enthusiasm, all about this great new product I've just discovered, which is the perfect solution for the problem he has.

        So thanks again, Rick, for a fabulous post. Now I know what I'm really doing.

        Warmest regards,

        Paul
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        • Profile picture of the author dorothydot
          Yes, thank you Rick. Very well put.

          There's an old saying for writers: When you write, you write. When you edit, you edit. And ne'er the twain shall meet!

          First draft is always a brain-dump. Emotion runs rampant when you assume the role of your target audience.

          Forget format! Forget outline! Just dump your guts onto paper. The rules and precision come later.

          Tell a story. Yank out the tears, the worries, the love, etc. - and throw it all smonk! onto your paper. [Or computer screen, whatever.]

          You are obviously a pro and expert wordsmith, Rick.
          Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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    Not just copywriting - any writing.

    There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.
    Ernest Hemingway
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    Essentially, like method acting. Sort of... method writing?
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  • Profile picture of the author markament
    Thanks for this. I stopped writing "by the book" sales copy a while back and started being simple and clear and as transparent as possible in the text. Sales are increasing. Plus I feel way better about it.
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    • Profile picture of the author Ross Bowring
      I love the teaching concept of "going first"...

      What helps me is to go "Being John Malkovich" and see through their eyes.

      Mentally filing through snippets of sensory experiences which act as microcosms of macro problems and feelings. Perhaps...

      The yo-yo dieter feeling a pang to fall off the wagon yet again as her mother-in-law's Prius crackles up the gravel driveway.

      They make for great insertions into copy. They create a multi-sensory reading experience, and (if they're accurate, or iconic enough) they show that you feel what they feel, you see what they see. Valuable bonding action right there.

      Again, great concept Rick.

      --- Ross
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  • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
    Enjoyed our chat the other night, Rick.

    It's awesome of you to step out and share
    some of your methodology.

    Talking shop is something that this forum
    certainly benefits from - and helps lots of
    folks who don't post here but read regularly.

    Nice, man. +1!

    Best,

    Brian
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  • Profile picture of the author gjabiz
    Rick Duris,

    Thanks. You've given a great clue to great copywriting which so many need to hear. I hope you don't mind as I'd like to enhance this idea, hopefully, it too, will be useful.

    My formula, found in Remote Influence is this:

    E of A = H of R SoM + P0I

    The Effectiveness of your Attempt to influence someone remotely is equal to the Harmony between the Recipient's State of Mind and the Pre-Occupational Interrupter used to gain attention.

    We gain that attention with a headline or visual, and the first few paragraphs need to be empathetic to the reader's "state of mind", which is their emotional state.

    YOU go into their 'state of mind' when you write, which is why you produce powerful emotional copy, which is the real KEY to getting a response. Now the thing the newbie or fresh copywriter needs to keep in mind, even a very successful promotion could have a very small % of buyers. In Remote Direct Marketing (a mail piece for example to a cold list) that pulls a 2-3% response rate could make you rich.

    And these would be the very targeted, well crafted, emotion laden "controls", that produce these results.

    ONline % for some niches are much higher.

    My research shows that the TIME of receiving the message is as important as the message itself, which is why I say the INTERSECTION of your message and your target's STATE OF MIND, is, as often as not, the crucial factor in having a transaction occur.

    Here is a tool that may help people understand the emotional aspect of copywriting:

    WARNING, it is somewhat Cryptic and sort of a shorthand, my PictoGrigms are simple child like pictures with a lot of information on them...

    Pictogrigm Of Persuasion

    When you are able to put yourself in their shoes, as you do by putting yourself in the right emotional state of mind AND when your message intersects with them at the right time, then you have results money-making, action causing, productive copy.

    Thanks again Rick for this very good post, please, don't hermit this stuff, we all need it.

    Gordon Alexander gjabiz

    Originally Posted by RickDuris View Post

    Hi all,

    In a recent conversation I had with one of the moderators, Brian McLeod, he encouraged and inspired me to share a bit about what I know and how I do what I do.


    He thought it might be helpful to folks.


    As you may or may not know, I fly under-the-radar about 99% of the time. Bit of a hermit, a recluse, I am.


    Today I am going to divulge here a bit on how I write copy. I hope it's useful to you...


    In the higher echelons of NLP, there is a concept known as "going first."


    Richard Bandler taught me this what seems like decades ago. (Like Gary Halbert with copywriting, Richard is like "the" god of NLP.)


    Basically what "going first" means is that if you want someone to feel an emotion like "love," you have to "go first" and feel love--FIRST. And communicate from that "space."


    From a copywriter's perspective, what this means is, not just thinking or writing about the emotion you want you reader to feel in some abstract, cerebral sort of way--but feeling it.


    Like REALLY feeling it. Digging deep. Then recording somehow because what you come up with will be brilliant.


    Most copywriters, and rightly so, research and wordsmith and labor over their work. I do that too.


    But what's more valuable and far more fulfilling to me is writing "from the heart." Shutting off that analytical part of my brain just for a while and just relishing in the joy of an emotion I want to invoke or provoke and communicating from it.


    You can do this too.


    (By the way, I'll bet there's some great stuff on the web about the most important emotions which people use to buy. But that's a different topic.)


    Here's what happens when you do.


    You lose the "manipulative" element that so pervades most less-than-effective copywriting efforts. You know what I am talking about. Where it's obvious that someone is "selling" you. Readers for the most part push back on that type of copywriting these days.


    Your work will be far more original. Because it will be YOU--not a swipe of a swipe of a swipe. You just have to trust yourself and your emotions. Your work will ooze with integrity.


    When you "jump into the pool" of an emotion you want to instill and/or describe, you will be amazed how more effective your copywriting will be. You'll ratchet up your copywriting skills 10X at least.


    Let me give you a couple of other related ideas:


    1. Work only with one emotion at a time. Don't dilute. Don't hold back. Cut loose. "UNLEASH" as I say. You can always edit/cut the "heavy stuff" later.


    2. It may help to think in terms of a story or experience in your past where that emotion was overwhelmingly present. Method actors do this. For instance, actors can cry almost on demand because they are able to instantly dredge up a memory they can cry about.


    So THIS is how I write copy. I work with the raw, unfiltered emotions people have or they want to have, when it comes to products or services they want in their life.


    I don't know if this post is helpful or not. But if it is, let me know and I'll share more in the future.


    - Rick Duris


    PS: There is only one downside to this strategy of "going first." It's fatiguing. At least to me. It drains me. Every day I "spill my guts."


    But at the same time, I rest my head each night knowing I have done my best work.
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  • Profile picture of the author SilentX
    That's wonderful advice, and I couldn't agree more. This works not only for copywriting, for most writing, as long as you're not trying to be too academic. But even so in some mildly academic works. Please post more with whatever you're willing to share with us
    I'm sure I'll enjoy and apprecaite it!
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  • Profile picture of the author puppetmaster
    Wow. One of the best tips I heard in a while.

    Reminds me of something I use a lot, a creative writing technique known as "Writing Down the Bones." The gist of it is that there's two conflicting forces between us -- the Writer and the Editor. The Writer is the playful, unabashed self, the one who just wants to pour out words after words. The Editor is the Grammar Nazi, the dictatorial coach who says "That's not good enough, again."

    That's why our writing ends up stilted and overly constructed.

    The solution, embrace the writer first. Write. Pour out your heart. "Go First" as you say. For 20 minutes. 30 minutes. Forget about the spelling errors and sentence inconsistencies. After that... Than comes the Editor. Edit away.

    When you implement that in your copy. You will get words that absolutely sparkle with riveting emotion. That's a promise.
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    • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
      Hi all,

      Thanks to everyone for reading and commenting. It's very encouraging, gratifying and inspiring.

      I wish I could share more, but lack of time and tremendous respect for the privacy and intellectual property of Clients and partners prohibit. But where possible, in the future I'll share my best ideas for writing winning copy with you.

      Best of success,

      - Rick Duris
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  • Profile picture of the author rafib
    I agree that good copywriting is story telling. No one wants to read an advertisement, everyone wants to read a good story.
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  • Profile picture of the author Vendor-Lock
    thanks for the tips Rick, very helpful. I will apply this to my future sales copy. err... try to anyways ! ; )
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  • Profile picture of the author anwar001
    I would welcome any tips or suggestions about how to feel the emotions we want to feel in the first place.
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    • Profile picture of the author darkonetoo
      Thanks for the extremely truthful and valuable post.

      I have never used any one else's sales letter to sell product even back in the '80's when direct marketing was all by mail or paper/magazine advertising.

      Getting into "state" and writing to that perfect customer is the only way I know to be successful, online or off....

      The only way it is sure to work is if you are correct about what the majority of people in your niche actually believe and want. Getting that correct is more a matter of testing than anything, and is far cheaper today than ever before.

      If you can write well enough, the world will kill for your content.

      Thanks again.

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