Copy Writers I Need A Headline Please

GET YOURSELF A SIMPLE MOBILE WEBSITE THAT CAN BRING IN CASH FOR YOU FROM LOCALS.


I dunno much about it...but rite now I can think of this only. I know what a mobile website is as I'm using facebook through my mobile.


One technique that I can suggest you is listing all the benefits that a mobile website can provide to your customer. Select the best benefit and state it in your headline.


If you know anyone who used a mobile website and built his business then...state it in your headline too.

For e.g. SMALL BUSINESS OWNER FROM DALLAS MADE $XXXX BY JUST ADDING A SIMPLE MOBILE WEBSITE TO HIS BAG OF MARKETING TECHNIQUES.

I hope this helps

Warren.

Hello John,

Good luck with your project.

From your orginal post I couldn't tell rather or not you're promoting an info product about mobile marketing or a service, but I assume you're doing an info product.

At any rate, these headlines could easily be adopted to reflect a service as well.

Here are a few I came up with -

"Marketing Expert Reveals Little Known Secrets That Will Turn Your Small Business Website Into A Mobile Cash Magnet"

"I Dare You Not To Use These Mobile Websites Secrets For Your Business And NOT Dramatically Increase Your Traffic, Your Leads, Your Sales, And Your Conversions - 100% Guaranteed!"

"What If You Could Spy On A Mobile Marketing Genius And Ethically Steal His Astonishing Step By Step Shortcut Secrets On How To Convert More Mobile Website Visitors Into Cash?"

"Who Else Wants To Cash In Mobile Marketing Using This New Incredible Magic Formula?"

"Introducing The World's First Nuts & Bolts, Start to Finish, ULTIMATE Guide To Transforming Your Small Business Website Into A Mobile Friendly Cash Magnet!"

"If You Put This Missing Ingredient On Your Small Business Website, Then I Promise, No Wait...I GUARANTEE Your Leads And Sales Will Go Bananas!"

"An Open Letter To Every Small Business Owner Who Believes That You Don't Need A Mobile Website In This NEW Economy"

"Revealed At Last, The Amazing Website Secret That Will Put You In Front Of Nine Hundred Million Customers"

"Did You Know That There Are Ordinary, Average Small Business Owners Quietly Turning Their Websites Into Mobile Marketing Powerhouses?"


Hope these help and give you some ideas.

-Garland

I believe asking for a headline is premature.

I think you really need to do the research on this, John.

I've talked with over 300 small business owners, toe to toe, over the last six months in Orange County.

While it's an interesting factoid that their website is not easily navigatable from a cellphone, their response is "Nice to know, but who cares, so what?"

The reality is their websites don't convert visitors into prospects, or prospects into customers--even with regular PCs and an Internet connection.

So it doesn't matter.

So basically your service, even if they were even looking for it, isn't valuable enough to pay for.

I'm not trying to rain on your parade--in fact, it's the oppposite.

Because your service IS valuable when the website is optimized for conversion. For instance, you'd be surprised how many websites do not have a free offer or an offer that collects their name and email address. And even if they do have one, the conversion rates are about 1% to 2% MAX.

What I am saying is you need to do the research. Get out there and start talking to small business owners for yourself and see what they say.

Obviously, the mobile market is exploding, but small business owners need to understand the value and relevancy to their business.

Maybe a special report with a killer title would be more useful.

- Rick Duris

IS YOUR SITE DRIVING AWAY ITS MOBILE VISITORS?