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Check out the eye candy in this sales copy!

by TheSalesTechnician
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I dont think Ive ever seen so much eyeball popping candy in one place!

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  • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
    Great for the ADD crowd.

    All the best,
    Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author Warren.Richards
    Nice work.

    I liked the part where an old woman's picture is shown stating she is 108 yrs celebrating her birthday and a sub-headline stating " If she can do it you can too......"

    If the copy is that good, then why isn't there any testimonials...? or is it only me who is not able to see them.

    The most bugging part was when I was trying to close the page and pop-up after pop-up came increasing my frustration.
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  • Profile picture of the author Hagbard Jones
    Turned me off instantly. I'm one of those who like to believe they're getting information, not an infomercial. As soon as I saw this, I'd bail.

    I get that I'm in a growing minority, and this is the trend, and it converts. I just weep for the loss of the editorial style.

    None of that is nearly as repugnant as the fact that I got bombed by "don't go!" popups like a million times before I could leave.
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  • Profile picture of the author J. Barry Mandel
    Looks like Super Mario Brothers to me!

    Otherwise overall it looks like they did a spectacular job with all the elements.
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    • Profile picture of the author TheSalesTechnician
      Originally Posted by Justin Mandel View Post

      Looks like Super Mario Brothers to me!

      Otherwise overall it looks like they did a spectacular job with all the elements.

      I would have to agree. The copy isnt jaw dropping by any means but man those hot button elements are bada** (although the headline isnt that bad either)!
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      • Profile picture of the author Matt James
        Great for the ADD crowd.
        Which means it's great for the IM crowd

        If the copy is that good, then why isn't there any testimonials...?
        Judging by my current experience with a Clickbank launch, this is probably down to CB themselves.
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  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    The guy launching it is a photoshop and graphics expert I think. Maybe
    he has an ecover creator or something, I don't remember exactly.
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    • Profile picture of the author JoshuaG
      So busy I could not focus enough to read it.
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  • Profile picture of the author jedediahd
    I like it. Lots of eye catching stuff at first glance, made me want to actually read the letter.
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  • Profile picture of the author JPROPS
    Eye-catching but a little busy for my liking.
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  • Profile picture of the author animecrazy
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    • Profile picture of the author kbrockm
      I must say it caught my eye, even though I'm predisposed to disliking anything that starts music automatically and has more than one popup. I know little about auto blogging, but this ad makes me want to learn more.
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  • Profile picture of the author DougBarger
    Great effort. I'd be

    extremely interested to see the split test results of a version

    with some more white space between the graphical elements


    to give the reader the perfect visual relief.

    True enough, there's enough graphical elements to keep the reader's interest

    and to avoid getting eye strain from too much text (because there's certainly not any jumbled text that I saw.

    But, I'm willing to wager without the white space for visual relief,

    they're almost doing to the reader with graphics what they successfully
    avoided with the text.

    Kid you not guys (if you happen upon this).

    If you test a version with just a bit more white space between
    the graphics,

    I think you'll be pleasantly surprised with the perfect visual relief all the way around
    and be rewarded by your readers with more sales for your efforts.
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  • Profile picture of the author Big Squid
    Rule of thumb - never design a site when high on cocaine.
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