Critique 'Bonding' Emails

So basically you have an autoresponder setup and you would like trained eyeballs to view them -- If so, hit me up Dave, you're a good guy on here I don't mind helping

The best thing about a list is they are already predisposed to your material and made a commitment to further read your content in the act of signing up. That's a huge plus!

Let me know.

Best,

Ross

Hey Ross,

thanks a lot!

I'll send you a PM right now.

-Dave

A little too early to pitch in my opinion. Building a solid relationship takes time.

Alex

Hey Collette,

a PM is coming your way!

-Dave

Dave, Alex is right, you need to feed them much more useful and actionable information, basically create a whole-lotta value for about 7 e-mails before you pitch them a product.

Also I kept seeing how you would go back and talk about your free report.

That word; free shouldn't be used from here on out unless you absolutely have to. You would typical use that word to get them to take action to signing up and since that is done, I'd be done with it altogether.

Also you don't have to pace them with what has been already done, from here on out you want to lead them. Maybe say something like, since you've had time to read my report, I felt you might be ready for...this presupposes that they read your report and if they didn't they better go grab it before they read on.

From here on out, it's all about hyping them with useful information, the trick is "useful but not enough" Leave out the biggest key ingredient that they will need to BUY at the end of your responders.

Best of luck,

Ross

Hey Ross,

you're spot on regarding the leading instead of pacing. I haven't decided on a title for my report yet, though once I have - I can use the title instead of referring to 'free report' constantly.

I'll also try to hammer in some tips in those emails I sent you - then there's 2 free PDF's and 3 emails with content mixed with bonding - before the first pitch. Should be enough, right?

-Dave

I have to go pickup my daughter, I'll be back in a few, I added your on Skype. Hit me up there if you want.

Best,

Ross

Collette, I've received your PM's and will respond shortly.

Ross, looking forward to having a chat with you on Skype!

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