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Critique my WSO Copy

by P.Sharma
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Hey there, I've been working hard to get my conversion rates over 13-15% which is what I get usually.

I want to improve the $/visitor value and also the conversion rates a bit so I am looking for suggestions

Thread in the test forum :

Code:
http://www.warriorforum.com/test-forum/425390-test.html
Looking forward to some great tips
#copy #critique #wso
  • Profile picture of the author AdwordsMogul
    The first thing I would to would be to put your own picture instead of Obama's - I could be wrong but political affiliation could affect response rates.

    Then I would split test over 300 - 700 views to see the difference -without making any other changes.

    Your copy doesn't say much about who you are and why anyone should listen to you.

    The names of the first two modules - make them more sound more benefit oriented like the other module names you've got.
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  • Profile picture of the author P.Sharma
    I will include a picture of mine and probably a video too.

    The $25 bill will be replaced

    Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    I scrolled down and saw that ridiculous image and clicked away immediately.
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    • Profile picture of the author sandrasims
      I agree, use your own picture or an image related to PLR instead of the Obama/dollar.

      I just scanned it... so didn't read the big blocks of text. How about adding some bullet points?
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