Critique needed of squeeze page? Is it compelling?

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Hi .
Please help.
Would someone please help me come up with more compelling bullets?
One word doesnot seem to be enough.
Please someone critique this page if you have time.
I would like it to be a little more compelling and cannot seem to make the bullets any more compelling than what is there.
Please any additions needed?


Thanks for all help and critique.

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