Hi guys, So I am an owner operator of a carpet cleaning business. In the past I have made my own general flyers / postcards. I bought the joe polish bootcamp a couple of months ago and have spent that time going through everything. From Joe's package the first strategy I tried was the big pink flyer. I sent out 3,000 over 3 weeks ago and so far I have had 0 response. I am putting the finishing touches to this postcard and would like some feedback please. Most of the copy is from joe polish and a little bit from a marketing guy in australia called Peter sun which I have bought some of him material last year. The blank space in top left corner i will be putting a photo of my ugly mug and the box on the back of the postcard I will be putting testimonials.
Postcard has been removed as I will be re writing. Thanks for all the input and will post new postcard when finished.