So far I have hired 2 copywriters and am working with a third currently.
The results of this have been discouraging to say the least (0.45% conversion rate is the best I've gotten)
I think this niche is particularly difficult to market to.
While I am waiting for my current copywriter to get back to me I thought I would give it a go for myself. I have created this based on a template of a video sales letter course that I have.
I am very close to walking away from this whole thing so any advice would be greatly appreciated!
Thanks in advance.
EDIT: not looking for a critique on my copy anymore. This was my own attempt at creating copy while I was waiting on my copywriter to get back to me with a revision. I will leave it up to him as it seems there is too much to be done on this copy.
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