by tdj
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Hey guys.

Just to let you know, I am not a copywriter. I love to read books on writing copy and studying the art of copywriting. I find it fascinating!

I do have a question for the experienced pros.

What is the difference between a DM sales letter and a sales letter on the internet? I am familiar with letter styles, stamps, envelope selection, teasers, and other details when a mailing is used. I get that part of it.

Perhaps I should phrase my question more like: Can the exact same DM letter work as well on the internet? Are there psychological reasons why people would buy a product thru DM rather than thru the internet?

What is the main benefit of doing DM?

Thank you.

Todd
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  • Profile picture of the author Jonwebb
    in my experience, the carry over is pretty great. Internet people tend to like shorter copy ( although this is debatable) while yu can really flex ur copy skills on a traditional sales piece.

    If needed u could use the same copy for both mediums

    Jonathan
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  • Profile picture of the author squadron
    You can use the same copy, but people are a bit more cynical and need more proof. Lots of quality photos and quality artwork help lift the copy and create credibility.
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  • Profile picture of the author WeavingThoughts
    It has to be tailored to the Internet audience. Varies from situation to situation.
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    First point: A successful direct mail piece will likely (but not definitely) transfer pretty well to the internet.

    The principles are the same, but there are a few differences...

    1) You can use (and should use) more white space on the internet. In direct mail, or space ads, the more space you take, the more cash you pay.

    On the 'net it doesn't cost anything to add more, so you'll see a lot of one-sentence paragraphs in the best promos.

    2) Magalog-style writing is more common offline, because every page almost has to be a self-contained ad. Writing and formatting has to be very carefully placed to ensure people will keep reading over the page. Online, you just have people scrolling, so you don't need to worry about "page breaks" as much.

    3) This is debated, but IMHO the internet is a more visual-heavy medium. Maybe people expect it because we don't pay for colors (unlike the print world where color is expensive.) That means your pages need to be visually stimulating. MindValley has some great examples of this kind of stuff.

    4) Generally you'll find different demographics prefer internet or DM (usually the older, more conservative crowd still prefer mail.) Having said that, the gap is closing pretty quick, and in some markets doesn't exist at all.

    5) Benefit? Not everyone uses the internet to search/buy things. But everyone has a mailbox. My mum and dad would both respond much better to a postcard or flyer than an internet sales piece, but I'm the opposite.

    -Daniel
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    • Profile picture of the author tdj
      Thanks Daniel. Just the kind of answer I was looking for. Speaking of pictures, I still see copy in the MMO online niche that still posts pictures of fancy homes, fancy cars, etc. To me that reads scam. Although I have not seen any test results, I would be curious on what a split test would for conversions with and without the pictures. (changing only that variable)

      Todd
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    Me too. Another thing to remember is MMO has a lot of subsets, so it depends on your particular market. The fancy cars etc is targeting the "lazy, greedy, completely new" subset.

    There's an old saying that you can't scam an honest person. I'm not sure I completely aree with that (look at people who are hugely generous), but it rings true to a point in this market. Most people stop chasing it after they see it once or twice and know better. But some people will eat that stuff up all day long.

    Food for thought.

    -Daniel
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    In the early days of Internet marketing some of those marketers
    simply copied the DM letter onto the internet and turned the product
    into a digital product and it did work and still does. In fact, the
    online sales letter is made to look as close as possible to a PRINT
    letter as possible (background, signature etc.).

    I wouldn't repeat Daniel's point because he basically nailed it,
    but you do have a lot more freedom online than you do with
    paper--clickable links, audio-visual elements etc.

    -Ray Edwards
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