So i do search engine optimization, and i realize the importance of having a script, can someone critique my script and offer recommendations.
My target market is Construction businesses
Script Begins Now
DM: this is _______
ME:Hey, this is [name] how you doing ?
ME: The reason why i'm calling is because when i search for your business online i noticed that it's really hard to find you. With that being said, i see your competitors showing up everywhere and probably making a killing because of it, were you aware of this ?
DM: I'm fine, im set, or im working with a company who is handling that for me.
Insert Rebuttal here( i don't have a quick response, someone help me lol)
DM: No, i wasn't aware
ME:Ok, I understand you're probably busy, but do you have time later today or tomorrow afternoon to get in front of a computer to see how much opportunities you're losing ?
Check your calendar and have them write down the date. [have them write it down, because if not, they will forget who you are and blow you off ]
What do you think ?