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Forum: Copywriting 5th June 2009, 03:58 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 763
Posted By vistad
Re: Can someone please critique this?

Hello Benq,
Near the end you have written separate yourself from the 95% or something to that effect, at two places. You can make it a positive statement by saying joining 5% of the winners or...
Forum: Copywriting 5th June 2009, 03:23 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 661
Posted By vistad
Re: Yet another copy critique request...

Lokesh most of the comments of the others hold. Another problem is that there is too much of "noise". There are small distracting sentences. At $3 K per month you can afford to pay out some of it to...
Forum: Website Design 2nd June 2009, 04:07 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 509
Posted By vistad
Re: Is Typepad and Effective Blog?

If you have worked with Wordpress stick to it. It should be simpler the second time around and you will be able to deliver an even better product.
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2009, 02:05 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,466
Posted By vistad
Re: Fierce B*tch or lame dog? Critque my site please

The top menu tool appearance is not attractive enough. Further do something about 'The Sexes' hanging in the second line. Maybe you could do something as unconventional as placing the 'About Me'...
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