Please critique my site, and advise on further tactics?

Here is the link to the product page, to save people having to subscribe.

Slaying Social Media - Your Free Report! | Managing Anxiety ‎

I have added it as a hidden page, with a link when you subscribe....good idea or bad method?

It would be nice if some did go through the subscribe process for me though and offer any feedback as I am using mailchimp via a free wp plugin and am not sure how 'smooth' or professional it all looks..

Good Luck Bro , but not only use your facebook page for get traffic you can use also facebook groups , twitter hashtags , google plus hashtags , google plus groups
because i think social media is number 1 for get traffic
Good Luck Bro

Hi,

The page seems way too short on info, I would not give up my email address with that little to go on. People protect their email addresses. You need to connect with your audience and show you are an authority on the topic.

There is plenty of freely available info out there on social anxiety disorder--look at YouTube. I don't see your blog. Both the page and the report are pretty slow-loading.

I thought there was some interesting info in the report, but not enough to make me buy another product. You should left-align the text, as centered text is hard to read. Also, it has a lot of errors and needs proofreading.

This in itself is not enough. You need to use SEO and have far more content to start with.

Hi, thanks for the replies and guidance on the obvious mistakes.

I shall rectify, work on and come back with the same advice

With regard to the question about my knowledge of the topic....I chose this domain a few years ago when i first dipped my toe into IM, posted a few articles and sold products via amazon. Made a couple of hundred gbp doing this per month but let it slip, and didn't try to capture emails at the time. Regret that, the site got hacked and lost ranking in google. .....sorry off topic...I have worked in the mental health area for around 15 years now so thought it would be good to try and work with the knowledge-base I have...but writing them blogs back them just didnt seem to have a good ROI in terms of time and effort, so I am now trying to revive it but using a different approach...a 1-4 page website that can simply build a list......rather than creating reams of work, although i appreciate that this one is slap-dash put together.

Hence any advice, however harsh or forward, is appreciated so I can try and work out how to carve a small bit into this big niche, that I actually do have sound and thorough knowledge on

Thanks again

Alan

ps...I have one other passion, that is helping small businesses get online...I will be posting my site soon for that and would love the same level of critiquing (ripping apart lol).

Thanks so far again,

Alan

Your product page is unreadable and unscrollable.

1. Align text to the left.
2. You can center important text and make it a different color than the rest, bold it, italic, etc
3. Add color to your headlines
4. Big paragraphs are impossible to read, so one sentence or so then "return"
5. Add some pictures, animations, something to help break up the text. I am so bored looking at it! Just do a google image search for anxiety and look at how much there is.

I'm going to edit the format of one section for you to give you an idea.



Chapter 3: Getting To Know Your Social Anxiety

Why do you have these fears?

There’s no more natural question to ask if you or a loved one are suffering from Social Anxiety disorder.

The more we understand Social Anxiety, including its root causes, the more apt we are in overcoming it.

Experts today part with some of the ideas of earlier decades in believing most cases of Social Anxiety disorder don’t spring from one events lasting effects, but instead Social Anxiety is the result of a number of different probable causes.

These include both environmental and genetic factors.

Here are some of the most prominent of the factors leading to Social Anxiety disorder.

While you read them take a minute to consider if each are likely to have been one of the forces behind your own experiences of Social Anxiety disorder. This type of revelation can bring hidden strength when you work through some of the methods to help cure Social Anxiety!

Genetic Roots
Social Anxiety disorder has been shown to run in family lines. Recent research has shown that this is not just learned behavior, but almost certainly also has genetic origins.

Over Developed Amygdala
The amygdala is the part of the brain responsible for fear response. When even slightly over developed Doctors feel this leads to an increased tendency towards Social Anxiety disorder.

Unbalanced Serotonin Levels
Serotonin is a key brain chemical that regulates emotional states. When unbalanced Social Anxiety disorder can become the end result. This can come from natural causes or have become unbalanced from past drug or alcohol abuse.

Family Conflict
A history of family conflict, especially at an early age, is one of the most common social factors known to cause Social Anxiety disorder.

Bullying
Bullying is one of the environmental factors that has been receiving a great deal of attention lately for it being known to aggravate young people’s Social Anxiety sometimes with very tragic results.

History of Sexual Abuse or Extreme Maltreatment
Sexual abuse and other severe maltreatment very often leads to the more severe end of Social Anxiety disorder. In many cases these types of experiences require multiple levels of therapy to ultimately resolve not only the heightened social anxiety, but also the other effects of this trauma.

Weather Conditions
Studies have shown living in an area where it is more cloudy and rainy than not (cities like Seattle and London) have much higher rates of Social Anxiety disorder than those with pleasant weather and plenty of sun. Some theorize that warmer weather encourages more social contact which leads to a lesser chance of Social Anxiety disorder developing. Studies are under way which will provide much more information on this interesting area of research very soon.

This list of the causes of Social Anxiety disorder is not all inclusive and sometimes determining its root can be difficult.

Thankfully the methods used to cure it have been shown to be effective regardless.

With the right combination of smart work and a willingness to try to change, real miracles can and do happen.

For the great majority of its victims Social Anxiety disorder CAN be cured!



Now this is nothing compared to what you can do on your actual website - but hopefully you see how what I have compared to your section 3 is much more readable and easier to scan

Design looks good , your website is a mobile friendly .

you need to add a video describing your products , this may help you to increase your subsribers and also driving huge traffic to your website .

Right, going to save this thread, take advice and post back on this thread when all the points have been covered...thanks again for taking the time to offer input.

Alan

You don't need reams of content, but what you do have needs to be upgraded considerably. With the experience and knowledge your years in the field have given you, you should be able to create content head and shoulders above the crap plr you posted.

Create 6-12 pieces of excellent content, then work to get it seen by people who a) need your help or b) can help you spread the word. The days of needing hundreds of keyword-optimized pages are gone. The name of the game is eyeballs on your offer.

Your attitude toward our sometimes harsh critiques is refreshing, and will stand you in good stead.