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I have a relationship site called back-with-your-ex.com and I am looking for some feedback on how it looks and feels. I mean tear it apart! No need to be nice. Looking for honest criticism. I am currenly only promoting the site through bings ad network. I have done some SEO but no ranking as of yet. Thanks.
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  • Profile picture of the author Adie
    You should fix your title as it is covering the whole screen width. Use any other decent themes.
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    • Profile picture of the author entrepreneur18
      That should not be like that in the first place lol...not sure how that happens thanks for the info. Is the content ok?
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      • Profile picture of the author 4DayWeekend
        You asked for honest...

        - The tiled background doesn't tile properly and therefore looks messy. I think a solid colour would look more professional.

        - Not feeling the black shadow on black text in the title, it makes it hard to read. And the shear size of it doesn't look great, it's too big and stretching to two lines is not necessarily and pushing content blow the fold for no reason. The shadow on the subtitle also makes that tough to read too.

        - The horizontal menu coming onto two lines looks messy. Why is there so much space between tabs? If the css was better this could fit on one line.

        - The white glow on the headers looks harsh against the pink background...

        - Same white background on bullets looks wrong on the pink background. I can only assume with these graphics that the background should be white?

        - Content looks fine though. Reads well. I'd probably cloak your affiliate links though.

        All in all, the content looks good but the design needs a lot of work. I'd probably suggest just downloading a nice clean theme and rolling with that. Maybe just get a header created or something.
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      • Profile picture of the author Istvan Horvath
        Originally Posted by entrepreneur18 View Post

        Is the content ok?
        Wrong question!
        This is the "web design" forum to get help with your... design.

        Content is not discussed here. Threads focusing on content get deleted. Just saying.
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  • Profile picture of the author Josh Monroe
    Lets see -

    The header liks other said need work. I also don't quite like the shadow on the text but that's just my opinion/

    The pink background I also don't like, white would perhaps look better? Again my personal opinion/

    AS others have said, content looks good but hide your links, I suggest 'pretty link' its a free wordpress plugin.

    Other than that, good job. I wish you all the best, this is a VERY competitive niche to break into, so good luck my friend!
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  • Profile picture of the author Moondogge
    I have to agree with many of the posts here. I would definitely change your theme and do some upgrades on your graphics. Stick with the video intro, that is the way to go for sure. There needs to be more separation in your content on the home page. The articles seem to run into each other and don't appear to be well thought out as far as placement. Good luck and great success to you!
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  • Profile picture of the author garveyonweb
    I think a banner headline would suit great. Healine text currently is weakest link. Text colours below not great but I like colour scheme.

    Couldn't get vid to work. So, initially, unsure if aimed at girls only.

    Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author alfasena
    Originally Posted by entrepreneur18 View Post

    I have a relationship site called back-with-your-ex.com and I am looking for some feedback on how it looks and feels. I mean tear it apart! No need to be nice. Looking for honest criticism. I am currenly only promoting the site through bings ad network. I have done some SEO but no ranking as of yet. Thanks.
    try to make a little masculine
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  • Profile picture of the author towarek
    I think you could consider to change the pink background. It looks cheesy
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  • Profile picture of the author bougalo
    your site looks more like a mirror page than an actual website.
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  • Hello there!
    I think your header needs fixing And with the tabs that refer to your pages, you can utilize graphics and use them instead of the traditional tabs offered by the website. It will add uniqueness to your website and will do away with the ordinary feel. Also, use bigger pictures on your posts. It will be more appealing if you can resize the pictures.
    Regards
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  • Profile picture of the author OmiTaylor
    Stockholm Syndrome

    Get rid of the meta widget

    header should be a logo not say welcome

    I'd keep the affiliate boxes off the top portion of the screen (the click here)

    The menu is overlapping into the next line

    Two tabs with similar heading make it look like a auto-blog. google may punish. visitors know somethings up.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rotwic
    The content doesnt matter as long as the website design is bad. You will definitely need to use a new theme and make it less messy or rather more organized. The visitors who come to your site already have a messy relationship, they dont want to see more mess. Theyll just back out from the site.
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  • Profile picture of the author mikeye
    1. Use some logo or header image. Also change the title. Not just "Welcome".
    2. The social media icons that follow the screen should be some question box or optin form.
    3. The top menu breaks into two lines.
    4. What's the difference between "How To Get My Ex Back" and "How To Get Your Ex Back"?
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