Constructive feedback needed on my first website
Hey guys,
I've just finished my first website, still awaiting my first sale so I think something isn't right on the site.
Do you feel the page is too long, a video would benefit or there's too much text.
I personally don't feel the page is too long but others do.
Would love to hear you thoughts
Your Flat Belly Formula: 11 Steps to New Body Confidence
Thank you
Nathan
I've just finished my first website, still awaiting my first sale so I think something isn't right on the site.
Do you feel the page is too long, a video would benefit or there's too much text.
I personally don't feel the page is too long but others do.
Would love to hear you thoughts
Your Flat Belly Formula: 11 Steps to New Body Confidence
Thank you
Nathan
Cheers, Laurence.
Writer/Editor/Proofreader.