Help With my website

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Initial thoughts
You need a better header
do a serious spell check, there are many many errors
get graphics that fit, the mini site set is squished and looks bad

add contact link. I personally, never ever buy anything from anyone that i cannot contact. I actually test their response time before spending money on a product.
hope all goes well!

Try to change background. To much red and there is no effect with red header. Check any light bacground.

You can find better color palette at COLOURlovers :: Color Trends + Palettes

First things first, I may disagree with the long design full of text, but a friend of mine who does copy tells me that this kind of site works well for sales to older people. (I have no idea what she means by that, but her site sells, so I can't argue with success.)

Having said that, I think that if you want to keep repeating yourself, and hammering your audience, it would help if you introduce yourself before you push the product. It would help if you can get some testimonials, put it in a box somewhere. Speaking of repeating yourself, you might also want to consider being repetitious with the sign-up button and links.

There is a lot of space wasted. 3/4 of the top banner is wasted space. You might want to put your name or the site or the product up there. The space between the bullet (arrows) list is also relatively large: it's large compared to the enumerated list two chapters down.

Regarding the length of the page, you might want to consider to shrink all the fonts by one size. That should make the page about three screens worth.

If you got the copy cleaned up, you might want to try it before you clean up the clutter. Good luck.