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10 years ago

Looking very professional!

Only thing i would change is the font of Watch This Video Now, other than that, looking good

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JeremiahSay

10 years ago

Any more critique guys? Is the website over-whelming? Should I break it down to step by step or perhaps drive traffic to a landing page first (funnel)?

Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

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Nauman K

10 years ago

Hey Buddy,
Site colour scheme look great
you don't need to change the video cartoonic is fine.
I have two suggestion.
1: there is a space between the video and the logo if you decrease it so that video comes up and a person view it without scrolling, also if the first video start playing automitacllly then it will be great as your website main part is video, not to many graphical headline/sub headline.
secondly I would suggest to improve the logo as a logo designer I think its very basic and color scheme is also not matching the website design.
you can try my initial free logo concept offer for test(not try market myself here)...

Other then site look great and wish you best of luck buddy.
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JeremiahSay

10 years ago

Originally Posted by Nauman K

Hey Buddy,
Site colour scheme look great
you don't need to change the video cartoonic is fine.
I have two suggestion.
1: there is a space between the video and the logo if you decrease it so that video comes up and a person view it without scrolling, also if the first video start playing automitacllly then it will be great as your website main part is video, not to many graphical headline/sub headline.
secondly I would suggest to improve the logo as a logo designer I think its very basic and color scheme is also not matching the website design.
you can try my initial free logo concept offer for test(not try market myself here)...

Other then site look great and wish you best of luck buddy.
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Nauman K

Hi Nauman,

I've checked out your logo design service (in your signature ad). Sure I would love to find out more. Since you're a designer yourself, do you have any idea on the design should look like on my website? Do you have any suggestions?

Please PM with some samples you have in mind. Thank you Nauman. Really appreciate your time and effort to review my website.

With regards,
Jeremiah

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juztin

10 years ago

Clean and very professional.

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Allintune

10 years ago

Looks good. Lots of call to action going on. Have you had a lot of sign-ups so far?

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JeremiahSay 10 years ago

Originally Posted by Allintune

Looks good. Lots of call to action going on. Have you had a lot of sign-ups so far?

Not yet. I just launched this website on 1st January 2013. Right now is still the testing phrase. I see what else I can improve before driving heavy traffic.

Thanks for your feedback.
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thomasjs02

10 years ago

It looks very nice and professional. I would imagine that this site in converting decently for you.

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Murphysmurfy

10 years ago

I would only change your logo.
It's hard to read and it has a different background color from the background of the site.

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WebdevelopmentGroup

10 years ago

- Should I change the thumbnail of the video?

Nope, keep it the way it is.

- Should I change the main video (cartoon) and record myself speaking instead (will that increase credibility)?

Keep this the same also. Users believe the situation when they see a human on camera

- Do you understand what this website is all about?

Yea some what

Cheers!,
WILL-

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JSutton

10 years ago

Originally Posted by JeremiahSay

Hi Warriors,

Need some serious critique and review on my website, it's still very new, haven't done any serious marketing on it yet.

Before I do any heavy promotion, I would love to hear your feedback first.

Is there anything I can do to improve visitor's flow?

- Should I change the thumbnail of the video?

- Should I change the main video (cartoon) and record myself speaking instead (will that increase credibility)?

- Do you understand what this website is all about?

Your feedback will be greatly appreciated. Looking forward to your critique and review.

Check the website in the my signature file below or simply click here.

Hey, your site looks fantastic! Might I just ask how/where you got the cartoon videos designed? They are very effective!

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Paxton21

10 years ago

The site looks really good, it is a much nicer landing and selling page than most. The video integration really differentiates it from competing sites.

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Husacul

10 years ago

The logo design is a bit painful to the eyes.
Maybe the thumbnail of the video is a bit too large? Later on you should check what is the most used resolution of you users and tweak it accordingly.

Overall I think you did a good job!

Cheers!

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icon24

10 years ago

Hi Jeremiah,

I really like the logo, very catchy. I think the site is very crowed. There is a lot of information on the home page and it loaded slow for me.

Maybe tuning it down a little will help conversion as well.

Thanks Joe