I have a thread in the warriors for hire area and I was wondering if I could get some constructive criticism on the sales copy.
Here it is:
I know it's not the best, I have changed the fonts, headlines and many things since first writing it.
I have read and used Chris Ramsey's checklist thread here: http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...-critique.html
Thank you Chris. I took what I could and made as many changes as possible.
Any advice, feedback, criticism is very much appreciated guys.