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Forum: Mind Warriors 16th June 2009, 03:25 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,646
Posted By RedPhoenix
Music lifts the Spirit

Take 5 sit back & chill - let the music lighten your load.

Enjoy.

YouTube - "War/No More Trouble" Playing for Change | Song Around The World
Forum: Mind Warriors 14th May 2009, 12:44 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 745
Posted By RedPhoenix
Re: What would you do?

Just let go and flow. Forgive myself for my monumental foolishness in so many things done & left undone ... said and left unsaid ... smile to my heart & the totality of my being. Meditate ......
Forum: Mind Warriors 14th May 2009, 07:31 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,043
Posted By RedPhoenix
Re: The Simple Secret to Creating a Fortune

Hey there mikeyg

This is indeed a very informative post - but you really should acknowledge the author when you use their actual words. The main body of your post is from "A Millionaires Secret"...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2009, 05:57 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 961
Posted By RedPhoenix
Re: Flesh Out This Copy In Progress! (updated!)

Your headline just sucks. "Business Critique .." What exciting major benefit will your customers be getting? ... What can they expect the critique to do for their business?

The copy that follows...
Forum: Copywriting 19th January 2009, 10:31 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 566
Posted By RedPhoenix
Re: Help with editing beginning content.

Here is my take on it.

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Forum: Mind Warriors 20th December 2008, 09:43 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,173
Posted By RedPhoenix
Re: Law of Attraction

Your character determines your experiences - both in the actions(or lack of) you take and the interpretation that you give them. (reaction/respond/insight)

Just consider the following - you get...
Forum: Copywriting 18th December 2008, 05:27 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 977
Posted By RedPhoenix
Re: Disorganized Sales Page :(

The organization or layout is not easy on the eye. However that should not be your main concern - as Stephen pointed out your headline is way too long and it lacks clarity. Generally it should not be...
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