Which design do you like?

11 years ago

Hi,

Honestly the lines are a bit thick, also the colors rather basic. Try thinning the lines and adding some gradient shading to improve the overall look. The blue probably looks the best right now.

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jumpa

11 years ago

Originally Posted by mgreener

Hi,

Honestly the lines are a bit thick, also the colors rather basic. Try thinning the lines and adding some gradient shading to improve the overall look. The blue probably looks the best right now.

Hi,
Thanks alot for your suggestion. i will try my best

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IceT

11 years ago

Hi there,

I agree with mgreener you should decrease the thickness of those lines. Also I would suggest to use an interesting background for them I guess a nice looking paper background would look sweet for them. Have a look here 200+ High Quality Free Paper Background Textures to Grab
The last thing I think you can improve is decrease the font size for the bottom text "This is special box" and how about adding some shadows thought I'm not sure about shadows.
Good luck in this, don't forget to report your progress

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jumpa

11 years ago

Originally Posted by IceT

Hi there,

I agree with mgreener you should decrease the thickness of those lines. Also I would suggest to use an interesting background for them I guess a nice looking paper background would look sweet for them. Have a look here 200+ High Quality Free Paper Background Textures to Grab
The last thing I think you can improve is decrease the font size for the bottom text "This is special box" and how about adding some shadows thought I'm not sure about shadows.
Good luck in this, don't forget to report your progress

Nice to meet you, IceT. Thanks a lot for showing me that links which rich of images resources.

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IceT 11 years ago

Originally Posted by jumpa

Nice to meet you, IceT. Thanks a lot for showing me that links which rich of images resources.

I just found this picture http://www.neckinjury.info/images/testimonial1.jpg I guess you could try to create something like that. Picture makes it more personal thus people will take it more seriously.
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rahulrockerdwor

11 years ago

Looks good to me, besides IceT has a very good point. I also would like to recommend you to increase the box size and not compromise with the font size.

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mikeavery10

11 years ago

The site is now looking good. Just keep an eye about font size.

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RobKonrad

11 years ago

Hi Jumpa,

I could very well imagine this on a page for toys, children's books, or something along that line. Looks very "childish" (which is not negative!).

I don't see it on any "serious" page.

I like it!

Cheers,
Rob

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aspectiit

11 years ago

all design are good

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saltonjace 11 years ago

That was really nice. It will be better if you use the gray or green and should decrease the thickness of the lines.
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ericbryant

11 years ago

A texture on the top and bottom pieces would look nice. Also, don't crowd the text, open up the spacing if needed, or reduce the curve of the lines. I say it's a good start!

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murrad

11 years ago

Colors must be changed to something like gray, light gray etc., and the lines can be dotted and remove the text "This is special box" at the bottom.

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Chimaera

11 years ago

The lines around the pink and yellow one are very overpowering especially the pink one.

maybe thin them and pick a shade of the box colour but 3 or 5 shades darker?

that way it will be more in keeping.

just something to try

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bloggingf

11 years ago

these lines are very thik and very bright also. so please redesign this site as by using very light color.
if you use light color means it looks very neatly.

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01objects

11 years ago

All designs are good and mostly its so simple

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adumpaul

11 years ago

Nice design.But thickness should be decrease.

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Iain Key

11 years ago

It would suit a very simple website design and the thick lines would work in a similar designed website, e.g. cartoon style block colours with enhanced edges

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wickedwebdesign

11 years ago

looks good !

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michbravee

11 years ago

Good and unique too... I have gone through your website.. It was really good.
Thanks for the share.

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engecars

11 years ago

I think you should remove the bottom text and try some background gradients.

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EricDelano

11 years ago

You should add some gradient and drop shadows, make them pop out a little bit more

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ayhaah

10 years ago

I like all the designs!!

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Absolute Logo

10 years ago

If I had to choose, I would pick the blue one

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Torro

10 years ago

I get the feeling of looking at a theater stage

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blogfreakz

10 years ago

I like the green box, and like what others said you should decrease the lines and add some gradient and drop shadows on it.

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cassiegetty

10 years ago

designs are very basic, you can try something modern and interesting.

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jumpa

10 years ago

Great thank for all you , fellow warrior, for your suggestion. i learn from your feedback, thanks alot.

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Pamellalovely

10 years ago

Originally Posted by jumpa

Hi, Guys.
I ve Just finished designing a special box fora comment or testimonial in a website.

I would love to hear some feedback from you guys to make it better.

See This

Have a great day!

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The layout of box is very good but the color is nor fine you need to chnge the color and also use lightly strokes of lines.

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resistancee

10 years ago

I'm not keen on the design but if I had to pick I'd say blue.

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Ramzy

10 years ago

Blue one gets my vote

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MattSchoenherr

10 years ago

Well, jumpa, I looked at the boxes, but without seeing the rest of the site these boxes would be used on, I'm not sure how anyone can give any real critique? It's like trying to critique a single line from a Shakespearean play without the surrounding context it came from? Maybe the example is dramatic, but you get the point, hopefully.

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Ibcontact

10 years ago

First one (blue color). I like it.

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livetut

10 years ago

blue on is good

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vijayalakshmi20

10 years ago

All design are look at simply good i like you so much your design.

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killer999

10 years ago

The blue one my friend

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jumpa

10 years ago

Thanks Warrior,
as long as i know, the aim of special box is to attract visitor. special box usually used for testimonial, order box, special bonus, and also squeeze page.
What i'm trying to do is make a box like that. Thanks to all suggestion

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nightshade877

Banned 10 years ago

I think you updated since my viewing, but it looks great the way it is now.

Good job on it my friend.

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spa3 10 years ago

I don't know if I'm a huge fan of the colors, they seem a bit to plain and strong, but it's a cool design. Guess it's also dependent on the style of your site and the overall theme too.
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bryansmith1129

10 years ago

Hello,
The Text which you have write in between the lines are not showing properly. Correct it. Else everything is fine.

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wilsonn44

10 years ago

ya site is looking like good and awesome keep going on.thanks

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Gene May 10 years ago

i like the light green one. its cool. thanks for your sharing.
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jumpa

10 years ago

Hi, Thanks for all the suggestion. I have make new box using your suggestion .
If you don't mind, please see this box

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spa3 10 years ago

Originally Posted by jumpa

Hi, Thanks for all the suggestion. I have make new box using your suggestion .
If you don't mind, please see...

I'm a fan of the yellow one. Sort of looks like a sticky note and has a more catching, but not too strong color. Also has good contrast. Much better.
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CoralN 10 years ago

Hi Jumpa,

You've done a great job on these last two designs, I like them much better than the initial 4. Although, as someone earlier said, the first ones, would certainly be suitable and fit in very well on a kids site.

Well done,

Regards,

Coral.
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zubizubi

10 years ago

The first one is really nice.

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bobjc

10 years ago

Its Awesume Creativity but your font colour is too sharp, its irrating our eyes.

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rosiebrown0

10 years ago

Its really cool.As a web designer i like it.

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stifboy

10 years ago

Am a Photoshop designer and from my perspective the designs are awesome. I really like them.

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shantanu

10 years ago

First Design is Looking Much Perfect Coz It Gives A Completely Different And Fresh Look With The Awesome Colour Combination As A Website.

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Chat

10 years ago

I have to say I like them, too. One question though, is the one at the top left intentionally smaller then the rest?

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jumpa 10 years ago

Originally Posted by Chat

I have to say I like them, too. One question though, is the one at the top left intentionally smaller then the rest?

Hi, thanks for your feed back
Yes , because it depend on how much text in it
the more text in it, the box will be longer.
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