Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 
14th January 2013, 11:58 AM
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Forum: Website Design
12th September 2012, 03:09 AM
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Replies: 69
Views: 2,482  Re: Please review my design and website
Hi IMMaster - vast improvements of the site - well done!
Better design and much easier to read...Do you still need moderator help? PM me and we'll get details sorted :)
Elle
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Forum: Website Design
7th September 2012, 11:36 AM
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Replies: 69
Views: 2,482 Re: Please review my design and website
The logo looks a little 'boxish' - is there any way you could get someone to redesign it to look a little more proessional - you might not to change it 100%, just enough for it to stand out more....
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Forum: Search Engine Optimization
5th September 2012, 07:37 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 9,114 Re: Market Samurai alternative?
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Forum: Search Engine Optimization
5th September 2012, 07:16 AM
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Replies: 16
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Forum: Website Design
5th September 2012, 01:12 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 412 Re: Can You please Review my blog?
I feel like the top banner with your logo is a little wordy - can you try and make it catchier to something like "Live and Work Anywhere!" ?
Also dial down the use of too much colour - it's a bit...
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Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display)
3rd September 2012, 06:20 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 704 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
3rd September 2012, 06:15 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,638 |
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Forum: Search Engine Optimization
31st August 2012, 03:17 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 680 |
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Forum: Search Engine Optimization
25th July 2012, 01:03 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 381 Re: Keyword Question - Need Advice Please!
The whole keyword "work home" is more likely to be successful, but as you say, it doesn't really read well! So you need to ask yourself - is it worth jeopardising the quality of the article simply to...
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Forum: Website Design
16th July 2012, 03:33 AM
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Replies: 42
Views: 1,245 Re: Please Review My Dating Website
In terms of layout, design and usability - I really like it! Really easy to navigate and love the "Step 1, 2 and 3" icons on the homepage. However, I agree with ALicenseToCode, the tree background is...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd August 2011, 10:18 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
15th August 2011, 10:19 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 665 Re: How Often Can We Say "I" in a Sales Letter?
I would say that using 'I' is great for putting across your story to your prospect, however the majority of the copy should be focussed on them, so the use of 'you' is more important in my opinion. ...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th August 2011, 02:27 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 595 Re: Could you check my website please ? Thanks !
I agree with Chr, the font needs to be changed to something a little nicer to look at, other than that, it's an easy enough site to navigate...
One suggestion; try changing the chunk of writing...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th August 2011, 04:33 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 594 Re: Critique Request - WordPress Design Site
There is too much listing of features and not enough promotion of the benefits of the package. Put more emphasis on how the features can benefit your customer.
For example instead of using "24 hour...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th August 2011, 11:24 AM
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Replies: 40
Views: 1,728 Re: Do I need to fire this copywriter?
I got confused by the headline and decided to just skim the rest...I imagine that a potential customer wouldn't stick around to decipher it!
Either get rid of your copywriter or maybe even get...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th July 2011, 02:32 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,005 Re: Please give me some concrete tips
One thing I would suggest about this is that the term 'British accent' could cover all types of accents over Great Britain! Maybe switch 'British' with 'English' and specify what type of accent it...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th July 2011, 03:56 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,763 Re: Please Critique my Brochure
The writing for the titles lacks continuity in size and style, just by changing these two aspects of the brochure should make for an easier read in my opinion!
Also ensure that the paragraphs are...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th July 2011, 03:50 AM
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Replies: 28
Views: 1,149 Re: Sales Page Feedback
Although there seems to be a little negativity with the feedback you have receieved so far, don't let it deter you! The page is extremely well written and the structure of the sentences makes it very...
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