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Forum: Copywriting 21st February 2017, 02:31 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 598
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Which of these "headlines" is more compelling?

I agree with ^^^^^.
"Get paid to shop" says exactly what your service is, offers an obvious benefit and is concrete.
Forum: Copywriting 30th January 2017, 03:59 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 820
Posted By gemmom24
Re: How Good of a Copywriter Would Donald Trump Have Been?

That's hilarious! (But we're not fooled.)
Forum: Copywriting 21st January 2017, 11:25 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 166
Posted By gemmom24
Re: What to write for Fashio Ecommerce Description?

You might want to hire a copywriter to do those descriptions. (I take it most of your jewelry is targeted toward women.) Is it costume jewelry, fine jewelry, or what?
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th January 2017, 06:46 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,221
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Where to hire writers?

Don't hire anyone that charges per word. Seriously. Most legit writers won't even go there. You want quality, not necessarily quantity -- whether that's 50 words or 500. So don't pay per word,...
Forum: Offline Marketing 5th January 2017, 05:17 PM
Replies: 241
Views: 3,977
Posted By gemmom24
Re: No MLM Thank You!

There are many legit MLM companies. I was with one for a couple years. They had a great training program, their products were good (but overpriced) and there were people making money at it. Some of...
Forum: Offline Marketing 5th January 2017, 05:03 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 244
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Help me with my offline business. How many websites, social media, etc should i have?

I would use one website and social media(s). You're branding yourself as a festival planner -- it doesn't matter what kind of festival it is. The fact that you do a lot of them, even though they...
Forum: Copywriting 9th December 2016, 06:00 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 613
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Industries/Companies looking for Copywriters

Sorry, I'll clarify. Agents do get paid well when they're busy. My sister is a real estate agent and I asked her about writing copy for the industry. She said that in her company, the assistant (or...
Forum: Copywriting 6th December 2016, 05:09 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,021
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Copywriting vs Article Rewriting

Thanks for that, I deleted my comment.
Forum: Copywriting 6th December 2016, 05:00 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 613
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Industries/Companies looking for Copywriters

ElSam, great idea, how you find agents that pay well? Most agents don't make a ton of money and probably wouldn't be willing to pay copywriter fees. I guess you have to find the $1million listers.
Forum: Copywriting 18th November 2016, 12:43 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 178
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Sources for copywriters and experienced figures particular niche.

It's the job of a freelancer to do research on your topic. (And yes, you have to pay for that!)
Forum: Copywriting 18th November 2016, 12:36 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 439
Posted By gemmom24
Re: New website - copy critique please!

I only glanced at it but my first thought was that you need to be more specific on what "healing" is. It's too broad of a term. Are you talking about chakras, mindfulness, what? You lost me there.
Forum: Offline Marketing 17th November 2016, 05:54 PM
Replies: 73
Views: 2,952
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Struggling Mattress Store

Claude, I have to say that your video is genius. You come across as trying to help, not trying to sell -- and I think that's the key.

Goliath, in addition to the great suggestions by everyone...
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2016, 11:33 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 350
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Please critique my first copy

Ouch. You lost this woman at "hi lady." "Classy" is also kind of an outdated term, if you're trying to appeal to younger women. I agree with other posters, you should probably improve your English...
Forum: Copywriting 1st August 2016, 11:48 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 941
Posted By gemmom24
Re: To All The Broke Copywriters...

Great post.

There are definitely niches.

I worked in the ad agency biz for many years and I don't think I wrote one sales letter. Print, radio, tv, social media, brochures, outdoor, direct...
Forum: Copywriting 14th June 2016, 04:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 524
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Copy Critique Appreciated (Beginner)

That's too much copy and info for an ad in the Clipper mag. I get that pub and I look briefly at the coupons then usually toss it. You need a great headline, a couple of bullet points and an...
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2016, 11:37 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 818
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Critique my copy for hotel website?

I agree with Steve -- where are the photos?! Obviously, that's not what you're asking about, but that's the first thing I thought of when I opened the page.

I think your copy is really good,...
Forum: Offline Marketing 11th September 2015, 05:33 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 975
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Angie's List for Offline Small Businesses

Just my .02 here. As a consumer, I was very disappointed with Angie's List. It had very few service people in my area (suburb of New Orleans.) I hired someone to fix my refrigerator's ice makes b/c...
Forum: Copywriting 11th September 2015, 04:40 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,256
Posted By gemmom24
Re: "But it's not for everyone": How negative can you go?

Hey Marcia, are you going to add pics? Is this for VBRO or Homeaway? I always scroll through the photos first then read the description. I'm sure you could come up with some pretty amazing pictures...
Forum: Copywriting 11th September 2015, 04:37 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 647
Posted By gemmom24
Re: How not to use metaphor in your copy?

Ok, I'll be the rebel here, but I don't mind the car analogy. The copy is clear, concise and conversational. That said, it depends on the audience. I'm assuming this is aimed toward a new, small...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2015, 09:04 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,757
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Is my portfolio good enough to start freelancing?

I think you have a good building block -- you know how to string a sentence together and that's more than some can.

You need to tighten up copy and punch up your headlines. You're making me fall...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2015, 08:34 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,459
Posted By gemmom24
Re: How to hire a copywriter... from a copywriter's perspective

Hey Mark,
Dig the toothpick and you're easy on the eyes! That said, why a youtube video when the visuals are static? (Unless I missed something...) I kept waiting for something to happen, visually....
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2015, 08:25 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,651
Posted By gemmom24
Re: copywriting competition

All the best!
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2015, 08:16 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 742
Posted By gemmom24
Re: if you could add one feature to writing software, just for copywriting...

Jesse, most good copywriters don't write from a first person point of view. We write from our target market/audience's perspective. We don't need software to point this out because we're already in...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2015, 08:06 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,466
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Writer's Market 2016 Available At Local Bookstores

Ok y'all, calm down. This IS a great resource and it led me to my first nationally published article. Whether it's being "promoted" or not, Writers' Market is a very helpful tool if you're looking to...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2015, 07:13 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,651
Posted By gemmom24
Re: copywriting competition

I have to agree with most posts, Jessie. I'm a seasoned copywriter and have worked for some big-name ad agencies -- and received quite a few awards along the way. I've also written articles for a...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2015, 03:08 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,163
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Everyone likes videos, right?

Text, any day. (Except if Odell Beckham Jr makes another spectacular catch.) Videos can take a bit to download and I don't like being held hostage to watch something for a set time. Oh, and then...
Forum: Offline Marketing 27th June 2015, 10:18 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,171
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Critique my $700.00 postcard

Ewen, I'll never argue your numbers or success!

The "ladies" bit was just a small part of my commentary. In some places, that would be a welcome salute. The U.S is in flux right now with regard to...
Forum: Offline Marketing 27th June 2015, 06:57 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,416
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Need a Brand name for Sparkling wine

I can think of a dozen ideas, but most copywriters don't work for free.
Forum: Offline Marketing 27th June 2015, 06:28 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,171
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Critique my $700.00 postcard

After reading your post card and all the critiques, I still can't figure out what kind of business this is. All I know is that it has to do with kitchens. And as someone who is actively looking to...
Forum: Offline Marketing 27th June 2015, 06:14 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,224
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Is this a good ad?

As a woman who gets frequent mani/pedis, my first thought was what time? What's considered "early bird?" 8am to 10am? I'd put that in there. Create some urgency. Also, if I wasn't familiar with how...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2015, 11:41 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,092
Posted By gemmom24
Re: "Create your own product" -- what does that mean?

Thanks, Chad and Adelaina. I get it now.
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2015, 09:24 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,092
Posted By gemmom24
Re: "Create your own product" -- what does that mean?

Yep. But what do you mean by "information hub?"
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2015, 08:28 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,092
Posted By gemmom24
"Create your own product" -- what does that mean?

Hey y'all,

Seen a lot of posts about making/creating your own product and selling it. I apologize for my noobness, but what exactly does that mean? When I hear "product," I think of makeup, sofas,...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2015, 10:56 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,658
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Let's Re-brand Apple

Princess, been reading many of your posts. I just don't get/understand you. Maybe it's me.
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2015, 09:28 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 5,754
Posted By gemmom24
Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?

I'd say #1.

I live in Louisiana, where mosquitoes are the size of small dogs. If someone guaranteed my yard would be free of these suckers, I'd bite in a heartbeat. (sorry, couldn't resist.)

#1...
Forum: Copywriting 10th June 2014, 05:27 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 849
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Old copywriter needs new tricks

Thanks, all. I joined DJ Gelner's legion of fans and told him so.
Forum: Copywriting 5th June 2014, 08:12 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 849
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Old copywriter needs new tricks

Holy crap, this is incredible, Brian! Thanks!!
Forum: Copywriting 5th June 2014, 08:10 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 849
Posted By gemmom24
Re: Old copywriter needs new tricks

Thanks for all the tips and help! I really appreciate it. (Had to change my account/user name b/c the site kept rejecting my password.) There are so many fabulous insights on this forum that I don't...
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