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Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2013, 11:11 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 3,457
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Tip 8 types of headlines... and when they are most likely to pay off

A lot of people have a hard time finding the right headline. And although you can "cut and paste" someone elses headline... that usually doesn´t do the trick. It may give you some results... but for...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd January 2012, 07:52 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 755
Posted By bankableResults
Re: Please critique/suggest a name for my first e-book

How about this headline:

The common denominators of highly successful people.


Here´s another common mistake to watch out for: Stating the names of these masters in your subhead kills...
Forum: Copywriting 31st December 2011, 06:06 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 937
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Too Many Testimonials - How to Use them All?

Here´s how copywriting legend Gary Bencivenga used a lot of testimonials in the copy for his The Gary Bencivenga Seminar (http://www.marketingbullets.com/b100dvd.htm)...

Perfect way to use a lot...
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2011, 12:30 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,224
Posted By bankableResults
Re: Is this the Worst Sales Page ever written?

Can you see how these small changes helps your copy flow better (and builds credibility right at the beginning!)..?

A veteran marathoner, author and speaker says...

"Finally! Now you can grab...
Forum: Copywriting 24th December 2011, 10:47 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 778
Posted By bankableResults
Re: Need Help With Tag/Headline

How about this:

The CEO of XYZ (a local company they recognize) says...

"<your name> doubled our income in two months with his simple online marketing strategies."

Of course this headline...
Forum: Copywriting 24th December 2011, 08:44 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,731
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: 15 Effective Copywriting Formulas

Here´s two other formulas:

SSS: Start. Story. Solution.

The star is the main character in your copy. It could be you, a celebrity, a customer or what have you.

The story: talks about how...
Forum: Copywriting 24th December 2011, 07:52 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 6,379
Posted By bankableResults
Re: The Ideal Copywriting Book For Beginners?

Claude Hopkins books ("My life in advertising" and "Scientific advertising") will teach you the basics a copywriter needs to be great.

However. It won´t teach one of the most important things...
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Forum: Copywriting 22nd December 2011, 03:33 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 747
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Market Research When Writing Your Own Website Copy

Before someone complains, I apologize for my bad English. I´m Swedish.

Anway. Just like you, I´m working on a sales page for my copywriting services...

Here´s some things I´ve found in my...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2011, 07:08 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 916
Posted By bankableResults
Re: Page optimized but not converting - please help!

Thanks.

I´m working on it. (I´m born and raised in Sweden, and I only write copy for the Swedish market... fortunately :P )

But I still hope the point I was trying to make got across?

Have...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2011, 04:05 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 2,085
Posted By bankableResults
Re: Sales Page Review Please

Sorry it bothers you so much (no I´m not). I'm born and raised in Sweden, and I only write (with good results) for the Swedish market. So yeah, my English is far from perfect. But I´m not here to...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2011, 03:02 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 2,085
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Sales Page Review Please

"10. Emotion - always a problem for me. I know people buy from emotion and justify with logic. But my anti-BS radar gets in the way of me writing some stuff."

That people buy solely on emotion may...
Forum: Copywriting 21st December 2011, 02:10 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 916
Posted By bankableResults
Lightbulb Re: Page optimized but not converting - please help!

A common mistake amongst marketers, is to get so exited about their own product... that they forget that the customer is in a totally different place.

And in most cases, he haven´t gone through...
Forum: Copywriting 17th December 2011, 06:37 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 729
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Honest Review of Bullets

Just a "picky" little thing that might be helpful to you:

If you change "Something Every College student needs to know..." to.. "What Every College Student Needs to know"... do you feel how that...
Forum: Copywriting 17th December 2011, 05:16 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 915
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Please Critique My Landing Page

Great point. I agree. This was just an example (from the top of my head) to illustrate one way (of many) to add urgency, and a logical reason for someone to buy now.

Of course this won´t do the...
Forum: Copywriting 17th December 2011, 05:08 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 4,846
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Joe Polish- I Love Marketing- Video Sales Letter

If every Internet marketer would read John Caples books, Vic Schwab´s "How To Write a good Advertisement, Claude Hopkins "Scientific Advertising" and Eugene Schwartz "Breakthrough Advertising"...
...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 13th December 2011, 04:03 PM
Replies: 51
Views: 1,080
Posted By bankableResults
Re: Your Addiction?

Here´s just a few of my addictions:

* Reading books (on copywriting, marketing, sales, psycology etc.).

* Geting up at 5 a.m. every morning and go for a long walk (about 8 km long to be...
Forum: Copywriting 13th December 2011, 08:12 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 636
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Can Newbies Sell Products?

There is a need and yup, the market is massive.

But as someone else said, you need to narrow your focus and choose a (profitable) submarket.

Let me explain: As probably know, the weight loss...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2011, 06:14 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 636
Posted By bankableResults
Re: Can Newbies Sell Products?

Here´s a big mistake a lot of newbies (and veterans) do:

They create a product THEY THINK a lot of people really need and want to spend their money on... and not a product that people actually DO...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2011, 03:57 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 915
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Please Critique My Landing Page

Well, there are some good points on your landing page. For example:

You have a picture of the product, which is great. You have 2 free bonuses... and it also says "limited time offer". PLUS you...
Forum: Copywriting 11th December 2011, 08:34 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 915
Posted By bankableResults
Arrow Re: Please Critique My Landing Page

First of, Im just coriuos... who is your target market?

Second, you make a very common mistake (even the "pros" do it every now and then) in your headline. And it does not pass the "Yehe Right"...
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