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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th July 2009, 08:41 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 648
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Lots of Free Time + $400 = Your Suggestions? What should I do?

Truly Baffling.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th July 2009, 09:08 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 739
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Determination - Has Changed My Entire Life...

Hey guy's,

I don’t post all too frequently, and more often than not I’m on here looking for marketing advice and copy critiques. The other day I posted a response to a young guy asking about...
Forum: Copywriting 6th July 2009, 05:33 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 821
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need honest Opinions on my Letter... Get the Lead or Sell?

Hey guys the new draft is up, am i on the right track here? i can also post a PDF so you can actually see what it looks like on paper, this does it no real justice on the thread.
Forum: Copywriting 6th July 2009, 05:30 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 699
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Need a Powerful press Release and Local Submission

Hey Guys and Gals,

im looking for a high quality press release and local submission to create huge buzz and get some free media about my new performance memberships, Can anyone recommend a...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2009, 11:31 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 821
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: HELP! Anyone Experienced with Direct Mail!

Thanx Mike, those are awsome pointers, will work on that now. my only concern is what will bring more profits? i know getting them in the door will generate a more targeted list of leads, but in the...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2009, 06:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 821
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: HELP! Anyone Experienced with Direct Mail!

can i get a bump?
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2009, 10:09 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 821
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: HELP! Anyone Experienced with Direct Mail!

I was planning on doing handwritten plain envelopes with kitchen drawer return lables...

I saw those express envelopes and they look really cool, but im kind of going more for the discreet...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2009, 08:56 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 821
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Need honest Opinions on my Letter... Get the Lead or Sell?

Hey guys,

***this is the newly re-drafted version of my letter still in the process of critique please send your feed back*****

I could really use some help. I have a big mailing going out,...
Forum: Mind Warriors 30th June 2009, 10:30 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,142
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Dreaming Too Big!!!

i used to shoot too high. Theres a difference between long term and short term. Pic your ultimate goal, even 1 million per year, then work backwards from that point until where you are at now.

I...
Forum: Mind Warriors 30th June 2009, 09:02 PM
Replies: 63
Views: 2,845
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Your opinion wanted: should I quit my job to force me to succeed online?

Thats just it. Taking the plunge, taking the ultimate risk, daring to chase your dream is about Doing what everyone else wouldn't. thats why no one else is where you want to be.

When i was in...
Forum: Copywriting 29th June 2009, 07:33 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,190
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Tear my letter apart please

Being a serious hobbyist of this niche, i can tell you the price is absolutely not too high, quite the contrary, looking at your screen shots, and hearing the music it mimmicks the one of two god...
Forum: Copywriting 27th June 2009, 03:48 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 623
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Does anyone have Experience Wiriting Athletic Performance Ad's?

absolutely we want to include a free rating card for our Official Nike SPARQ ratings as well or a discount coupon and maybe even a response card of some sort
Forum: Copywriting 27th June 2009, 03:26 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 623
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Does anyone have Experience Wiriting Athletic Performance Ad's?

No, it's going to be put on the letter like a hand written message to add a personal touch
Forum: Copywriting 27th June 2009, 02:48 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 623
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Does anyone have Experience Wiriting Athletic Performance Ad's?

Hi all,

been away from the computer for a looong time. It's done me alot of good, but im ready to mail to a red hot list of 2000 student athletes for my performance training and speed development...
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2009, 05:50 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,027
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Is it really all about the Copywriting?

No. As i have found out the hard way. Somtimes being honestly passionate about your service product or niche, having a desire to deliver a memorable and honest experience, and being able to convey...
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2009, 01:45 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,212
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

thank you for your response bro alot of good information, however i have to get real quailified personal training leads, its for a in your face training sessions and consultation, and from the last...
Forum: Copywriting 4th April 2009, 10:04 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,212
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Well guys, im on my last limb here, unfortunately if i cant start generating some leads, i'll ave to can the business and might be filing a chapter 13.

thank you all for your time and...
Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2009, 06:49 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,212
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

hey guys if you all could check the updated version of the site and tell me what you think, im having a hell of a time here, my bounce rate shot to 85% today from good traffic, and ill i did was...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2009, 12:09 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,212
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Wow that is great, thank you anne this has just given me a ton of new ideas!
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2009, 07:01 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,212
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

hey there, thanks for the response. unfortunately i have tried 5 different sites and the UGLY sites with a personal feel have performed just absolutely piss poor here. I even had a strong offer and a...
Forum: Copywriting 29th March 2009, 08:06 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,212
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

absolutely, im going to work on that right now! i like the low risk offer better as well. one issue i think i may be having is that we are trying to kind of change the game in personal training. we...
Forum: Copywriting 29th March 2009, 07:58 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,212
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Thank you very much for the suggestions, all very good ideas and I will deffinetly fix all my typos!

as for the prices, belive it or not we have found over 6 different sites that the ones with...
Forum: Copywriting 29th March 2009, 06:55 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,212
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Hi all,

you've probably seen me on here eveyr now and then asking for critques, i act on everything im suggested then once its all implemented i go and test.

Well so far my website...
Forum: Copywriting 1st March 2009, 02:46 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 960
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Vote or Opinion on 4 Headlines

LMAO wow that is insane im sold. Butseriously not to ruin your thread bro, ijust think short and to the point would be better. im fining it works better for all of my sites.
Forum: Copywriting 1st March 2009, 02:05 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 960
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Vote or Opinion on 4 Headlines

I Know Right? what whas i thinking. lol What customer would want to get straight to the point.
Forum: Copywriting 1st March 2009, 09:00 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 931
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need a full time copywriter...

LMAO i concur
Forum: Copywriting 27th February 2009, 10:07 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 577
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Arrow Who is THE best, and Who thinks they can match them?

hey all, as some of you know im working on building an effective direct lead generation site for my private fitness company. we've started having some success but we wanna take it to the next level....
Forum: Copywriting 27th February 2009, 06:51 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 960
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Vote or Opinion on 4 Headlines

Get more traffic. Guaranteed.
Forum: Copywriting 26th February 2009, 01:31 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

bump bump bumpty
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2009, 10:24 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 980
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: I Used To Write Headlines Like This Until I Read It was not as effective...

Oh and back when fast food was first created no one wanted to invest in it because "no one would ever just want to eat and run" "eating was a time for family" times are changing, and a new...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2009, 10:16 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 980
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: I Used To Write Headlines Like This Until I Read It was not as effective...

well by traditional i meant the sales letter that is used by most people in this industry today. you know, 30 pages long, big fat camel cased headline, bolded subhead, intro from the desk of blah...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2009, 10:03 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 980
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: I Used To Write Headlines Like This Until I Read It was not as effective...

@ ray, using camel casing in adwords headlines and on sales letters and pages is alot different IMO
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2009, 10:01 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 980
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: I Used To Write Headlines Like This Until I Read It was not as effective...

I whole heartedly agree.

the traditional sales letter is quickly going out the window. I shortened the copy, changed the formatting of my headlines and condensed the pages to more catalogue style...
Forum: Copywriting 14th February 2009, 11:21 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

Does anyone here have an example of a highly converting or effective Personal services website?

something we can model after or atleast get an idea of? we need a base of what is the most...
Forum: Copywriting 13th February 2009, 02:16 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

Awsome i have the team working on a great looking landing page set up to maerge with the current site. i would love ffeed back based on the split as soon as its up!

you all are great!, anything...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 08:43 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

so cherylin, you work alot with those who have web 2.0 sites, do you belive that catalogue copy with the right layout and still a "web 2.0 style" design can convert?
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 08:24 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

Awsome. im working on a variation of that site and one more "ugly site" landing pag to split test and see which one pulls better!

thank you for the help its very much appriciated!
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 04:39 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

absolutely cherylin thank you so much! i am deffinetly willing to revamp thing s bit. and with the split testing i compelty agree. that is how we got to the design and copy and layout we have now.
...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 04:33 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

Thank you justin, i completly agree, i think i will revise what we offer to make it seem more realistic and as Loren suggested word it so that it doesnt seem like such a hard sell!

this is great!...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 04:25 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

Ahh good points thank you loren, and Writer i think a sense of urgency may be very good, i will set up like a monthly special offer and a limit timer for how many people can recieve the free...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 03:24 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

awsome thank you guys! i am very seriosuly considering video and a walk out spokes model, we have tried two Ugly sites, and left them up for a month each and the conversions were just flat for some...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 02:57 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,045
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Arrow Need some Experienced Advice!

*UPDATE*

ok everyone who replied to this thread before the help ws greatly appriciated, if you could please compare the two sites new and old now and tell me pro and cons of the new design and if...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st January 2009, 10:43 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 679
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

thanks for the input, but the fact is she DID start out at a size 22, shes now a size 6! I have her phone number and email and shes more than happy to speak with any prospect in Dis-Belief. It's...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st December 2008, 11:48 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 679
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

i can assure you its true, shes english, i dont know if maybe they count odd sizes, i know we do here, atleast my fiance does, she has size 3 dress', and i shop with her and routinely see odd number...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st December 2008, 09:48 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 679
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

thanks everybody, ive reworked this a bit www.getstrongtoday.com (http://www.getstrongtoday.com) here is the updated one, let me know what you think
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st December 2008, 01:23 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 679
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

thank you all very much! to clark: about my guarantee that puts alot of risk on me, refunding a client for 12 weeks of personal training services at 2400 per month is extremly taxing especialy with...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st December 2008, 10:51 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 679
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

LOL Thanks for the kind words ;)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st December 2008, 10:43 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 679
Posted By IRON_STRONG
We've almost made it, but we need your help!

Could someone Please review my Website?

I need a really honest critique, Right now we have finnaly figured out the secret to generating steady traffic locally which we are excited about....
Forum: Off Topic Forum 7th November 2008, 02:27 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 572
Posted By IRON_STRONG
A Joke Some of You Will Enjoy...

barrack obama, oprah winfrey, and michele obama were soaring at 30,000 feet in barracks new G5 (bought with the tax payers cash) and barrak looks up and says,

"You know, Could throw A 1000 dollar...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 6th November 2008, 02:18 PM
Replies: 282
Views: 7,936
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Obama Won!

one thing i totally disagree with... i can level with you here.
Forum: Off Topic Forum 6th November 2008, 02:17 PM
Replies: 282
Views: 7,936
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Obama Won!

see everything's all better!
Forum: Off Topic Forum 6th November 2008, 01:55 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 1,191
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Ron Paul predicts world government because of Obama

nah not really the ron paul, homies post about the edn. i do come from a religious background.

please dont fry me anyone but you can study any religion or cultism and the same shit shows.
...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 6th November 2008, 01:43 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 1,191
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Ron Paul predicts world government because of Obama

ok i think that is officially the scariest thing i have ever read.
Forum: Off Topic Forum 6th November 2008, 01:00 PM
Replies: 282
Views: 7,936
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Obama Won!

ok now you can **** off - grossman. just becuase we place reason for creation doesnt mean we are backwards and unclivilized you fool
Forum: Off Topic Forum 6th November 2008, 12:26 PM
Replies: 282
Views: 7,936
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Obama Won!

LMAO - Will Do my Freind. I have to give it to ya that was funny...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 6th November 2008, 12:14 PM
Replies: 282
Views: 7,936
Posted By IRON_STRONG
Re: Obama Won!

i'll retire from this nonsense. i can belie whatever i chose and so can you guys i suppose. Crongrats for the dems on the election!
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