Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th March 2015, 03:32 AM
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th January 2015, 01:26 PM
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th January 2015, 01:21 PM
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th January 2015, 06:29 AM
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Replies: 10
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th January 2015, 03:26 AM
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Replies: 10
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th January 2015, 03:03 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 614 |
Forum: Email Marketing
23rd January 2015, 01:19 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 736 |
Forum: Email Marketing
23rd January 2015, 01:16 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,644 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th January 2015, 01:08 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th January 2015, 06:36 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Re: Help me With My Headline
HA! HA! YOU SO FUNNY... NOT! :D
Please be respectful to others. Try to offer a positive solution. If you don't want to help that's ok but post your funny jokes elsewhere please.
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Forum: Copywriting
9th January 2015, 06:33 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Re: Help me With My Headline
I decided to tune out my headline; you're right, hype is a turn off; I f you want to see how my sales copy turned out check the WSO section this Sunday after 10 am EST.
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2015, 08:39 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Re: Help me With My Headline
I want to tune out my headline. Don't like to hype things up anyway. Here's an idea for a headline:
"How To Launch A Successful WSO On The Warrior Forum Using 3 Simple Ingredients You're Most Likely...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
4th January 2015, 05:24 PM
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Replies: 163
Views: 6,701 Re: WSO sales copy being Rejected! - Tips please
I think the main reason for this rule is because the Warrior Forum owners want to get more money in their pocket. They want to eliminate the competition (Warrior Plus, JVZOO) Let's tell it like it...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2015, 01:28 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 |
Forum: Copywriting
3rd January 2015, 09:37 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Re: Help me With My Headline
Many can criticize but not many can offer value. How little of you, little man. It looks to me like you have no clue what you're talking about; offer a solution or go somewhere else.
I care...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd January 2015, 06:55 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Re: Help me With My Headline
Awesome headline. I could model my headline following that structure:
"How To Launch A Successful WSO On The Warrior Forum Using 3 Secrets Ingredients The Big Gurus Don't Want You To Know About!...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd January 2015, 04:49 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Re: Help me With My Headline
I looked at my headlines again and they're lame, I know. The wording is a bit forced and awkward since English is not my native language. And I still haven't found what I'm looking for...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd January 2015, 04:43 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 |
Forum: Copywriting
3rd January 2015, 04:38 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Re: Help me With My Headline
I really like your headline but it's too short and you should add some more meat to it. You're on the right path. Also I don't want to create this WSO exclusively for those who haven't launched one...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd January 2015, 04:33 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Re: Help me With My Headline
Those are good suggestions but I want to write a headline which reflects the truth as I perceive it and in my opinion there is no super simple system for launching a successful WSO. If it was super...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd January 2015, 04:21 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 |
Forum: Copywriting
2nd January 2015, 02:29 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,955 Help me With My Headline
Dear warriors,
I plan to release a WSO soon and I'm having trouble creating a winning headline. I am about to release a product about how to launch a successful WSO.
I want to include the...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th December 2014, 09:25 PM
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Replies: 107
Views: 6,142 Re: RIP Free WSOS. Another nail in the WF coffin?
That's awesome! No worries then. I was worried that W+ might only automatically add subscribers to their list and not ours as well. Thank you!
But with the Free WSO's wasn't that the case? Those...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th December 2014, 08:54 PM
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Replies: 107
Views: 6,142 |
Forum: Copywriting
12th December 2014, 12:16 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,140 Re: Rate My Landing Page
For people who suggest to add proof of income on the page, I'm sorry but you have no idea what's going on... It's a squeeze page for devil's sake and I haven't seen proof of income on any squeeze...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th December 2014, 12:09 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,140 Re: Rate My Landing Page
What investment are you talking about? I'm asking for their freakin' email and not asking them for 1 million bucks; they put in their email and they can find out what the fuss is all about; the blind...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th December 2014, 10:38 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,140 Re: Rate My Landing Page
I thought about it but got nothing snappy and to the point so far. Care to share one of your amazing title ideas?
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Forum: Copywriting
11th December 2014, 10:35 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,140 Re: Rate My Landing Page
Hey, you hurt my feelings:D I'm actually smiling if you look closer :smilies_confused:
If you don't like my pic, take a hike; I don't 'wana' coach anyone who's unable to recognize a 'wild, beautiful...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
25th November 2014, 07:10 AM
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Replies: 40
Views: 1,510 Re: Short articles are better than long one ?
As long as your articles are interesting and helpful, the longer, the better. I have very long articles that I'm ranking on Google for a variety of keywords without doing any SEO to them whatsoever....
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
25th November 2014, 02:18 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 879 Re: Where/How do I promote my blog?
Guest blogging used to be a good way to drive traffic but as of right now, Google is penalizing guest blogging networks pretty heavily.
This seems to be where the brunt of Google's ire is...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th November 2014, 12:17 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,140 Re: Rate My Landing Page
Sounds like a good tip worth testing it out. I've heard about the 2-step opt in and I know that lead pages provide it but I don't want to invest in lead pages yet.
Does anyone know how to...
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Forum: Copywriting
24th November 2014, 11:37 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,140 Re: Rate My Landing Page
Thank you for the suggestion. I have my picture on the page to brand my name and to create more trust.
I think adding millionaire pics would make it look phony in my opinion.
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Forum: Copywriting
24th November 2014, 09:54 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,140 Rate My Landing Page
Hey guys,
I had this landing page created for me and I'm not sure if it's going to convert well. Also I don't know which traffic sources are suited best for what I have to offer. Please let me...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
12th November 2014, 11:04 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 620 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
11th November 2014, 04:26 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 620 |
Forum: Warriors For Hire
30th December 2013, 07:37 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 538 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th June 2013, 02:04 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 726 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th June 2013, 11:21 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 365 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th June 2013, 11:09 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 365 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th June 2013, 12:39 AM
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Replies: 39
Views: 886 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th June 2013, 12:30 AM
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Replies: 31
Views: 1,149 Re: Who Wants a Fight?
Since you're sitting on your arse, plan on working on your project for 1 hour straight. Don't get off your arse until you complete a video even if you have to piss in your pants! No sniffing on your...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th June 2013, 12:16 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 835 Re: Want to Know More About Email Marketing
Give away a valuable freebie to get your foot in the door. Next you should provide pure value for the next 2 or 3 messages and then you should start creating messages that provide value and recommend...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th June 2013, 12:08 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 |
Forum: Copywriting
6th June 2013, 11:49 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 |
Forum: Copywriting
6th June 2013, 08:37 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
Thank you for your advice! As a matter of fact I actually did check out other WSO's sales copies and 'took' from them what I thought works best and fits my story.
I like your phrase Warriors YOU...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th June 2013, 08:27 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
Thank you for the suggestions. With a little help from someone I came up with a new headline and I hope you like it. Here it is:
“Discover How I HiJack and Drive Thousands of Targeted Visitors to...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th June 2013, 08:01 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
I can say the same thing about you: you're heading down in the wrong direction if you think a plugin will create content that really matters; if you plan on putting the same rehashed garbage on your...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2013, 07:33 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
The words 'discover' and even 'learn' sound a bit pretentious and pompous to me as well because it looks like I am commanding or imposing my point of view. I think I'll use the word 'find out' to...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2013, 03:52 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
I personally like the word 'Discover' because it makes it feel like something fun to do, you're being a kid again who's ready to unwrap a gift and DISCOVER something awesome, something you really...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2013, 02:43 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
I agree that the headline is too long but this is the winner so far:
"Discover How I Drove Thousands Of Targeted Visitors To My Web Pages by Leveraging Valuable Content That Only Took Less Than 2...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2013, 02:25 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
Your headline is much better; the problem is my numbers won't be as attractive because I didn't achieve such results in such a short time frame. I'll rephrase my headline according to your formula...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2013, 01:41 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
The single biggest problem my target audience has is traffic.
The best solution I provide to solve the traffic problem is to create and leverage valuable content to drive traffic. The valuable...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2013, 07:51 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 869 Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?
I launched a WSO recently and I'm struggling coming up with a good headline. I would appreciate any tips on how to improve it. My current headline is the following:
Discover My Simple Formula On...
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Forum: Search Engine Optimization
6th May 2013, 03:53 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,247 |
Forum: Search Engine Optimization
6th May 2013, 03:43 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,247 |
Forum: Search Engine Optimization
5th May 2013, 06:19 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,247 |