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Forum: Copywriting 6th July 2011, 12:23 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,392
Posted By lemonarian
Re: I can't take it! I'm outsourcing my copy...what should I look for in copywriter?

To kind of reiterate what Pete was saying about what to look for in a writer...

If someone tries to advertise their mad writing chops... that they are master wordsmiths who can twist 'em and turn...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2011, 03:32 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 815
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Toot toot! Care to help this Newbie Rubie?

Yeah, I second what Ewen said.

Remember that you're not selling copy... you're selling results.

In regards to age, I'm 17 and have been writing copy since I was 13. My clients couldn't care...
Forum: Copywriting 29th June 2011, 01:28 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 665
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Super-sized sales pages

"Believe" is probably one of the most dangerous words in marketing.

Let us know if you still feel the same when you have tested it.
Forum: Copywriting 27th June 2011, 11:31 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 1,651
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What's the "exit strategy" for a Copywriter?

Well... duh. I never said that. In fact, I agree with most everything you have said.
Forum: Copywriting 27th June 2011, 11:16 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,162
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Long Copy - How long is too long?

Write until you're done, and then cut out everything that isn't necessary. Take Stephen King's advice... The second draft is the first draft -10%.

As far as too long goes... it's true that it can...
Forum: Copywriting 26th June 2011, 10:26 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 1,651
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What's the "exit strategy" for a Copywriter?

You missed my point entirely. First of all, the prerequisite to my statement was "if you're a top copywriter" - which is not true for one in a thousand...

I'm not arguing with any of your other...
Forum: Copywriting 25th June 2011, 12:12 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 1,651
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What's the "exit strategy" for a Copywriter?

To follow up on some of the thoughts Rick started above... if you're in the game for the love of the game... you'll find a way to keep writing. Even if that just ends up being writing crappy mystery...
Forum: Copywriting 24th June 2011, 05:17 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 734
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Website home page copy needed

My point being that no one would really be interested in the first place with a complete lack of details... you don't have to give away the entire project, but something like what your budget range...
Forum: Copywriting 24th June 2011, 01:53 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,470
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Satanic Sales Pitches....

^ Well said Colin, agree 100%

Yeah, it made me open the thread. But yeah, you will need some strong "reason why" immediately following the headline, explaining why you made that choice of words...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd June 2011, 07:48 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 734
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Website home page copy needed

Not exactly a mystery.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd June 2011, 07:46 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,407
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Can you get quality copywriter for under $500?

The short answer is no, not really.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd June 2011, 07:45 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 956
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Tragedy Of The Copy Writer

For proof elements, Bencivenga is the man. Don't exactly have a link laying around though, wish I did.

Here's a fantastic article from Perry Marshall (amazing copywriter who no-one really thinks...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd June 2011, 02:31 PM
Replies: 68
Views: 4,653
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Top Copywriting Tips for Newbies

Tip #15:

Don't be clever.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd June 2011, 02:29 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 956
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Tragedy Of The Copy Writer

Great post Stephen!

An interesting note might be that ol' Gene Schwartz actually spelt it out as "copy writer" in Breakthrough Advertising. ("I am a mail order copy writer who makes his living by...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2011, 03:23 PM
Replies: 68
Views: 4,653
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Top Copywriting Tips for Newbies

Tip #5: Realize that the above tips are definitely not in order of importance... They are all technique-oriented.
Focus on the principles that make the techniques work instead. Learn the...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2011, 12:24 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 742
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Product Sales Copy

"A niche site that sells products."

Great. So you just described every website on the internet.
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2011, 06:01 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 944
Posted By lemonarian
Re: My Headline's a Headache! Suggestions needed as bad as Tylenol at this point

To date I haven't written for a single crowd that would respond better to big words.

Nearly all great copy to nearly all markets read at a 5th or 6th grade level.

I saw your other thread. It's...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2011, 05:50 PM
Replies: 53
Views: 9,390
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Your Wife Is Hot...

If that is placed by the highway in the middle of the desert, and the potential customer driving by has his AC out of whack... yeah, it would most likely pull some sales.

Nice find!
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2011, 05:48 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 965
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Tell 'Em To Go Away, Because They'll Be Back

Good thread Stephen. I agree 100%.

Haven't had something as ridiculous as a $5 incentive happen to me just yet, but mostly it's those who want me to write for free in exchange for services or...
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2011, 12:56 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 876
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Copy Flow

Reading it aloud. Several times.
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2011, 12:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,565
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What is the cost of hiring a copywriter

Yeah, you're speaking on totally redundant terms, as if everyone here follows your exact frames of reference.

To some, $10k is really cheap. Just saying.
Forum: Copywriting 14th June 2011, 11:13 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 13,370
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Bullet points or paragraphs?

I'm with Squeezy.

It isn't a question of either or. Of course it depends on a lot of things and varies from ad to ad, but typically a paragraphed "story" section accomplishes an entirely different...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2011, 06:22 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,616
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What it takes to be a Copywriter

Well said Pete. And as you said... that's just the starter menu.

The 10,000 hour rule certainly applies.
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2011, 05:30 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,759
Posted By lemonarian
Re: NEW Joe Sugarman free copywritng example | copy swipe file | no opt-in

Brilliant ad. Flows like a greased slide. Classic Sugarman.

Thanks for sharing, added to the ol' Swipe file.
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2011, 05:21 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,616
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What it takes to be a Copywriter

Oh Lord. This thread is fantastic. For entertainment purposes.

What it takes is to get real, and willingness to sacrifice several years to get a grip on just the fundamentals of what makes good...
Forum: Copywriting 12th June 2011, 11:54 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 857
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Brand-New to all of this - I have an eBook, but need a copywriter

Good enough for not making any money, maybe.

Long sales letters are not synonymous with hype. A good sales letter does not contain hype, though sometimes it might *look* like hype to everyone who...
Forum: Copywriting 4th June 2011, 11:54 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 809
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Copy disguised as blogs. Copywriters needed for new project.

So basically you need copywriters to act as affiliates, but on your web properties?
Forum: Copywriting 4th June 2011, 11:51 AM
Replies: 79
Views: 6,635
Posted By lemonarian
Re: 4 Most Opened Email Subjects! (tested)

The #1 factor in open rates isn't in the words. From personal experience it's the people on the list, how familiar they are with you and how willing they are to listen from what you have to say.
...
Forum: Copywriting 4th June 2011, 11:45 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,560
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Fiction Books By Copywriters

Not a copywriter, but Lee Child. The Jack Reacher novels. Fantastic writing style.
Forum: Copywriting 3rd June 2011, 12:44 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 3,452
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Should You Write Your Headline First?

When starting an ad I'd write a headline, but only as a placeholder to give me some direction. It wouldn't be used in the final copy.

Typically I start with the bullets. It's really the bread and...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd June 2011, 10:20 AM
Replies: 78
Views: 78,366
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Warrior Forum Copywriter Directory

Real Name: Linus Rylander
Warrior Name: lemonarian
Areas of Expertise: Info products. Sales letters, Autoresponders, Lead capture pages
Areas of Interest: Marketing/bizop, Self help, Fitness,...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd June 2011, 10:10 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 902
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What minimal changes will increase the conversion rates a lot?

Yeah, it's your message/appeal that needs work.

The headline is a part of that, but just rewording it to say the same thing won't make much of a difference.

The biggest problem you're facing is...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th March 2011, 02:24 PM
Replies: 80
Views: 5,935
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Ashley Madison to surpass facebook?

Hate to beat a dead horse here, but... lol.

Facebook literally defines the social platform online. That game is done. They won.

Where did you get this... umm.. data?
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2011, 07:18 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 993
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Do Your Outsource Your Articles/Blogs?

Looks almost exactly the same over here. Writing is definitely my strong point... so I do that, a lot.

Find your own strength, do what you enjoy... delegate the rest.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th March 2011, 07:16 PM
Replies: 106
Views: 5,187
Posted By lemonarian
Re: The Truth About Warriors Making Money (or not)

Lol, yeah I doubt you'll see a whole lot of honesty here. Too much ego at stake.

And as for the question, as someone else mentioned, it's a matter of relativity. Don't know what you consider...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 10th January 2011, 06:44 AM
Replies: 93
Views: 19,629
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Crazy link wheel !!

Lol is this thread still active?

Anyway... no - you don't have to go all ape**** crazy making the most complicated linking structures you can think of.

I have a multi-tiered modular linking...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 22nd August 2009, 12:00 PM
Replies: 93
Views: 19,629
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Crazy link wheel !!

Haha, did I include this in the original report? ...I forget, lol.

It's not really that crazy compared to things I've done (10-20x as big).

Thanks for all the indirect compliments everyone :P
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 6th August 2009, 08:29 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 9,564
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Link Wheels Explained - Free Guide

Wow, way to rip off my work. Doesn't really surprise me that someone would do this either... ah, gotta love the industry.

Thanks XRay.

If anyone cares to know, I coined the term "linkwheel" and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th April 2009, 01:11 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,229
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Anyone here own flexsqueeze?

Yeah the latest version does allow that which is really cool. Recently updated my aff marketing blog to FlexSqueeze as well... the LinkWheel in my sig was made with the FlexSqueeze Squeeze page...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd April 2009, 04:00 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 737
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Best place to learn article/affiliate marketing?

Don't wanna be all promoting or anything in here, but my honest recommendation would be to join the NicheChoppers forums, TONS of material on this kind of stuff in there.

Sales page is on Niche...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 17th April 2009, 08:11 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 724
Posted By lemonarian
Re: I want a double listing. My homepage is on page 1, but my second page is on page 13.

Have you tried building links? Lol, but seriously, usually you just need more links.

Crosslink between the homepage and the second page, like an internal reciprocal link. Then just start pumping...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 17th April 2009, 08:05 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 3,845
Posted By lemonarian
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 16th April 2009, 03:44 PM
Replies: 94
Views: 2,866
Posted By lemonarian
Re: DON'T "personalize" w/pics if you look of school age.

Yeah that's what I thought first too. I didn't reveal my age until a couple months into the game when I had already established credibility etc... worked out fine :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 16th April 2009, 02:53 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 553
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Before I lose my mind: OpenOffic - How To Create A Table Of Contents

Top menu... Insert -> Indexes and tables -> Indexes and tables... select Table of Contents... hit OK.

Done :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 16th April 2009, 02:50 PM
Replies: 94
Views: 2,866
Posted By lemonarian
Re: DON'T "personalize" w/pics if you look of school age.

I agree, to an extent... Personally I use it as a branding point. I'm already getting a lot of attention in our little community and I'm a moderator of a pretty darn big (not WF big though, but of a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 11th April 2009, 06:53 AM
Replies: 154
Views: 7,741
Posted By lemonarian
Re: 3 years later - My biggest Success Tip For $$$

Good advice. As I'm working in the IM niche I want to be aware of what's going on so I'm subscribed to a couple of these lists. However I end up reading like 3 of them a day and just mark the rest as...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th April 2009, 10:06 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 486
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Advice on linking

Choose either of the two and then stick with it... I don't use the www part.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th April 2009, 07:12 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 517
Posted By lemonarian
Re: My first site! Please review my sales copy/website... does it suck?

Read up on some copywriting mate. It doesn't necessarily suck, but work on some of the things mentioned above.

Start strong with a powerful headline... you can even use a classic one like "You're...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th April 2009, 07:07 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,100
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What Is Blackhat?

Blackhat marketing doesn't have to be illegal, or even unethical for that matter. Usually it is unethical though. I wouldn't say BH SEO techniques are unethical for example, but doing something like...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th April 2009, 05:39 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,132
Posted By lemonarian
Re: I guess this guy Told Me!

Awesome, brutal honesty for the win. Thanks for sharing that mate :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th April 2009, 05:27 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 707
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Can someone explain? Targeting keywords in domains...

Alright, your real competition would be 16,700 results.

And well, you're right about keywords in domains, it's a LOT easier to rank with keyworded domains... that's not all there is to it though....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th April 2009, 04:56 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,105
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What's the easiest way to make Passive online income?

Learn how to sell as an affiliate, then promote someone else's membership site :)

That's what I do anyway.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th April 2009, 03:10 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 892
Posted By lemonarian
Re: IM Is Too Hard, Sometimes It's Easier To Just Give Up!

Oh yes. Persistence is KEY. Good metaphor with the rocks, even though it was somewhat odd :)

Something I learned a few years ago... the FPP formula for success, all it takes to be successful no...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th April 2009, 02:04 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 443
Posted By lemonarian
Re: What would you do with $5,831.40?

Yeah that's a great point. I agree, I think this is a complete waste, however as someone else mentioned Universities are also businesses and if they can get away with this then that's just good...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th April 2009, 01:24 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 861
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Clickable PDF anchor text dilemma ...

Hmm... okay. Never had a problem with that. Did you check your PDF settings?
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th April 2009, 01:05 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 861
Posted By lemonarian
Re: Clickable PDF anchor text dilemma ...

Yeah, what do you mean with poor quality? I use OpenOffice for pretty much everything... it's really simple, and I have no clue what you're talking about with poor quality.
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