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Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2012, 05:23 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,813
Posted By netvicar
Re: Please critique my marketing piece for my cleaning biz. Thanks!

Good to see you are attempting to be proactive in marketing your business. That said, this is a bad piece. Don't use it.

If this letter arrived in my mail I probably would have tossed it right...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 09:25 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,012
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique This Sales Copy 2.0

I kind of thought the comment was odd too. I scored the text earlier. It rated at only 3% passive sentences. Unusually low for someone struggling to speak English as a second language. So I figured...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 07:02 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 11,068
Posted By netvicar
Re: What is the Best Copywriting Course?"

Joe. When you asked that question with a smile on your face I thought you were kidding.
Then I Googled "sales copies...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 01:03 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,012
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique This Sales Copy 2.0

Your new opening is much much better.



The headline still needs work though. Also, after this point you still jump into talking about yourself too soon. And the attempt at a story involving...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 01:58 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,077
Posted By netvicar
Re: How to command the fees you deserve as a pro copywriter

Harlan Kilstein also mentions avoiding the time issue. I believe it's Value Based Copywriting that mentions never telling a client how long a project took nor how easy the project was to complete (if...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 01:17 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 4,599
Posted By netvicar
Re: For newer copywriters, a few bits of advice for getting paying clients.

Thanks. I listened to the interview. I had not known of Doug's history. Interesting account. Thanks for sharing.

I'm miffed you left off the punchline about how MH's meeting with those twenty...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 01:05 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,010
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique my copywrite please

As stated, it seems you know what you are doing as far as the product goes. That's a good thing. And you are on a good track in trying to speak authentically to readers.

However, the home page...
Forum: Copywriting 12th August 2012, 09:18 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,012
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique This Sales Copy 2.0

Ok. I make a point of never reading other reviews before commenting. This is to avoid skewing my observations. That said, there may be redundancies here.

Your sentences are too long.

Your...
Forum: Copywriting 12th August 2012, 07:35 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 11,068
Posted By netvicar
re: What is the Best Copywriting Course?"

In another forum posting the question was asked, "What is the Best Copywriting Course?"

Unfortunately few links were provided for the referenced resources. So I took the liberty to "Google" each...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th August 2012, 01:40 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 3,755
Posted By netvicar
Re: Would You "Fake" A Webinar To Make A Buck? A ? Of Integrity

Old thread, I know. Beaten to death, I know. However, I just found this thread while doing a Google search for software to present pre-recorded webinars (not fake webinars).

Well, lying is lying....
Forum: Copywriting 19th July 2012, 11:51 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,565
Posted By netvicar
Re: Anyone Know The Elements of an Offer that Frank Kern suggests?

Thanks for updating the link. Seems the blog structure has changed a little since I last visited.
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 11:32 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 890
Posted By netvicar
Re: Company recruiter recruiting freelance copywriters ?!?!

angiecolee, feel free to ignore this question if it steps too much into confidential area of your practice...

Along the lines of working on-site on a contractual basis do you quote and bill the...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 11:19 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 890
Posted By netvicar
Re: Company recruiter recruiting freelance copywriters ?!?!

videolover7, thanks for the idea. Might be doable. I've published so much info over the years that this may be a case of being too close to the forest to see the trees. Never considered being a coach...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 10:57 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,565
Posted By netvicar
Re: Anyone Know The Elements of an Offer that Frank Kern suggests?

Bummer. For some reason warrior notifications are no longer reaching me. And the video did not stay online long. Copyright infringement got it shutdown. Maybe once you can pm you can let me know what...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 07:09 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 692
Posted By netvicar
Re: Looking for a copy writer

Thanks Mark for posting that link.

Robert, look at the link Mark posted and resubmit your question(s). My guess is to assume you are asking for possible quotes to have your page at Are YOU Ready...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 07:01 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 77,985
Posted By netvicar
Re: Warrior Forum Copywriter Directory

Real Name: Andre Bell
Warrior Name: netvicar
Areas of Expertise: Copywriting, Internet Marketing (PPC Campaigns, web copy, email campaigns, SEO, SMM), Software User Stories, Online and Offline...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 06:38 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,124
Posted By netvicar
Re: Who Are Some Copywriters on WF that I Can Learn From?

LOL!!!! Funniest thing I've read all week. Of course, it ain't entirely true but still funny :)
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 06:11 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,025
Posted By netvicar
Re: What Am I Doing Wrong?

Ok. First off, I've not read other comments yet. Didn't want to skew my thoughts. So, much of this is probably going to be redundant. Maybe all of it. Or maybe none.

First thing that grabbed my...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 05:32 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,187
Posted By netvicar
Re: I thought his ads sucked---and told him so

I agree on both points. I've worked with a couple franchise headquarters and with several unrelated individual franchisees. At the top they don't care about quality of marketing materials. They care...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 05:09 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,029
Posted By netvicar
Re: How do you attract prospects to take you up as a copywriter?

To build up your portfolio create mock ups. At least three different fields or niches.

Oh. Here's a dirty little secret you may feel a little squeamish or reluctant to use: after you create the...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 03:11 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 890
Posted By netvicar
Re: Company recruiter recruiting freelance copywriters ?!?!

Thanks. I feel the same way -- nope to becoming an on-site employee. However if they are looking for someone to collaborate with, give them a bit of direction and outsource some --or all-- of the...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 02:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 890
Posted By netvicar
Company recruiter recruiting freelance copywriters ?!?!

Wondering if any of you fellow copywriters has ever had the experience of a company recruiter contacting you about possible freelance copywriting gigs. This recruiter is HR department of the...
Forum: Copywriting 14th June 2012, 05:56 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,565
Posted By netvicar
Re: Anyone Know The Elements of an Offer that Frank Kern suggests?

Howdy RH. I don't normally 'plug' other copywriter's works on forums (it seems sleazy) but this is a page worth bookmarking, if not printing:

21 Incredible Copywriting Formulas (I Use)...
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2012, 10:27 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,347
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique for my first sales page. Thanks from a Newbie

Dude. What you just wrote is in an honest, sincere voice. Write like that [albeit in a structured format] and your copy will work much better than your proposed sales letter. Or as you said, hire...
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2012, 12:37 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,131
Posted By netvicar
Re: Please critique my sales letter

Howdy Ivan.

Good first attempt. Congrats on initial sales. As you probably are aware, though, the piece needs work. You can get stronger conversions with several serious tweaks.

"Create a...
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 10:04 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,347
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique for my first sales page. Thanks from a Newbie

Joner.

First off, I'm not here to attack you. And I've not read all the comments - yet. So if this hurts that is not the intention.

Anyhow, this sounds very much like the questionable credit...
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 09:28 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,299
Posted By netvicar
Re: Prospecting Email--Whadda' You Think?

I basically like this, as a sales letter. But there are three things you should consider. I'll get to those in a moment...

Before you send this out keep in mind that no matter how much you stick...
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 05:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,299
Posted By netvicar
Re: Prospecting Email--Whadda' You Think?

I basically like this. But there are three things you should consider. I'll get to those in a moment...

Before you send this out keep in mind that no matter how much you stick to CAN-SPAM rules...
Forum: Website Design 12th August 2010, 05:29 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 705
Posted By netvicar
Wordpress "Power" Squeeze Page Wanted

I need a custom wp squeeze page designed for the static landing page of a blog.

Any recommendations for designers?

Oh. I've already registered the plugin from wpsqueezepage.com....
Forum: Copywriting 6th October 2009, 03:55 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,049
Posted By netvicar
Re: First Salesletter - Your critique and feed back please!

First off, nice choice of colors. Also like your web layout [opening drop case, font usage, tables, bullet graphic, ebook covers , etc]. Lots of consistency in design throughout the page. Your use of...
Forum: Warrior Forum Classified Ads 1st March 2009, 10:36 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,002
Posted By netvicar
Re: Grab $998.50 Online Commissions Again And Again! The Gurus Are Watching This One!

"The Gurus Are Watching This One!" means there are some pretty big names already onboard to promote this when it launches.

It means sign up as an affiliate before launch date, watch the free...
Forum: Warrior Forum Classified Ads 28th February 2009, 05:13 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,002
Posted By netvicar
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Forum: Copywriting 29th November 2008, 09:55 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,525
Posted By netvicar
Re: How to still write great copy if you have NO proof

I think it was Claude Hopkins who said the greatest proof available is demonstration i.e. letting the prospect experience the product themselves.

I don't think there's any greater proof than...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th November 2008, 11:22 PM
Replies: 181
Views: 15,179
Posted By netvicar
Re: Hopefully, this doesn't happen to the Warrior Forum... Michel Fortin's Copywriters Board closes

I don't mind so much he decided to stop people from posting. I would have done that a long time ago. Gosh. He and Sylvie have enough to deal with. Babysitting stupid behavior shouldn't have been one...
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