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Tip #2 Today's tip is about headlines. One of the most talked-about subjects in all of copywriting. I'll make it easy. How many times have you searched on Google for ... [read more]
Tip #2 Today's tip is about headlines. One of the most talked-about subjects in all of copywriting. I'll make it easy. How many times have you searched on Google for ... [read more]
I've now been a freelance copywriter for the last 11 years. If you're a brand-new copywriter, I'm going to try to give you a tiny peek at the art and ... [read more]
I see this question a lot. It's the wrong question. The real question is... How do I find good copywriting clients? That distinction matters. A lot. Every time I'm looking ... [read more]
So I decided I'll make this whole thing go beyond 3 tips. Are some thinking I'm going too far? Probably yes. Will I continue? Again probably yes. To recap: You're ... [read more]
Please see the following guides to our community: Warrior Forum Rules & Etiquette for Posting WSO Marketplace Rules List of the best all in one, knowledge compendium threads You are ... [read more]
Hi guys, My professional background is in journalism, PR and corporate copywriting, however I'm thinking about turning my attention to writing sales copy online. While I've got tons of copywriting ... [read more]
Hi A few weeks ago I posted a thread asking for a critique of some web copy. So many of you gave me some really solid ideas and gave a ... [read more]
When hiring a copywriter, do I provide the benefit? Example: With the offline niche, I know my service will provide more leads. What I don't know is what benefit will ... [read more]
Have you ever come across some of those sites or letters whose headlines make you wonder? Stuff like "Torrential rains to blame for record flooding" We've already got a thread ... [read more]
Hello, I wrote the sales copy for the page which is listed in my signature. It lacks images which are found in most sales copies (reduced price, 100% guaranteed, etc.) ... [read more]
Ok, let's face it - the internet is a haven for market research. Not only can you do 1-way research, but you can do dynamic research (such as surveys and ... [read more]
Hi Folks As copywriters, we know about the importance of GRIPPING our visitor's attention right away, and NOT LETTING GO of that grip until they've whipped out their credit card ... [read more]
I've been using various versions of this sales page for more than a year: Lower blood pressure naturally This is the one that converts best. It's profitable but I'm far ... [read more]
Hey There's a technique of NLP (derived from the work of Milton Erickson) many of you may be familiar with, called Embedded Commands, or Embedded Suggestions. Basically certain words, if ... [read more]
Hey We all know the importance of generating trust and rapport with our readers and potential buyers. I know good strategies for this are pacing the readers current experience, telling ... [read more]
Hey Guys. In some of my Most Successful copy I have written in another Voice It allowed me to "Brag" a bit more without seeming like a braggart For example ... [read more]
I've asked for help with my salescopy here before (6 months or so ago) Many of you helped me (it seems I failed to have a call to action among ... [read more]
Hi! I took the advice of some great warriors here on changes to make to my site: 1. take it off of the original domain for my other related service ... [read more]
Is it ok to translate a whole top ranked site from english to my native language? In essence,I don't infringement copyright,because I don't copy and paste,just translating and adapting to ... [read more]
Hey Guys. Which of these 6 headlines do you like the best? Headline 1 Expert Communication Specialist Exposes Powerful Techniques To Seduce Your Market And Make Them Want to Do ... [read more]
Okay, Just looking for a little input here. Does anyone have a guideline for how long or short an email should be? I am referring to an email in an ... [read more]
Please critique my sales copy. http://offer.newbie-site.com I will also except offers on rewriting it. I don't have a ton of money but I could use the help and would be ... [read more]
Hey everyone, so today I was reading the newspaper ann noticed twice that sentences began with the word "and" and another time the word "but". This makes me think that ... [read more]
Hi, As I am busy doing my first product of my own and this is new to me I need an estimate on the cost for writing sales page. Can ... [read more]
Morning Warriors, I revised my sales copy as you all suggested, I have 5 different versions rotating within my script and will keep the one with the highest conversions...I still ... [read more]
Hi all you amazing copywriters out there... I need a 'fresh' pairs of eyes to have a look at a site This product has a large market, the site is ... [read more]
Hey all, In the past, I"ve been able to work with several great copywriters from the WF, but the ones I currently use are working on other projects and won't ... [read more]
Hello and thanks for checking this out. If I may, I'd like to receive your opinions regarding several matters on my sales letter for Escape from Anger. Quickly, I'm in ... [read more]
I've written a few sales pages before for my clients but I'm just getting started writing my own. In the past I've noticed clients making changes and adjusting what I ... [read more]
I have been a freelance copywriter for over 5 years, but I was able to develop a relationship with a few clients and I stayed busy. I was lucky for ... [read more]
I've mentioned it a few times, but one of the best ways to hone your copywriting skills is to watch infomercials. The people behind them have the benefit of massive ... [read more]
I would love to hear what anyone thinks of this sales page. It is a different format than you are normally used to seeing online. I don't have enough posts ... [read more]
i need one page of copy for a free WSO i am doing. It is for a video product called Clickbank Cash. Please PM me...
I know that great writer has or is inspired by metaphor which give the energy, creativity to write great books, novel, articles, can you share a effective metaphor that can ... [read more]
Just wondering, out of all the full length genuine Direct Mail adverts you've, log or short, which one would you classify as amongst the worst? While not necessarily, please try ... [read more]
When looking for a copywriter, what are the qualities YOU look for? Be as specific and as general as you can be.
Okay all you amazing headline experts. Need more help on a headline for a promotional booklet. One of the services I offer is writing promotional tips booklets. This works well ... [read more]
I didn't just throw this up. I did research it and gave it my best shot. I've never done this before in my entire life. Could you guys please look ... [read more]
Hey everyone out there, how are y'all doing? One of the most important things any business owner wants is CERTAINTY: certainty about why isn't this product selling as well as ... [read more]
Hey Warriors! I would like to ask for feedback on my attempt at writing copy. This is my very first product and hoping for good results. Visit the draft sales ... [read more]
Ok, so when writing copy it usually has to be interesting the whole way through. Will someone actually read long copy that touches home in many places or is it ... [read more]
Hi all, This will be a short e-book. More like a report, perhaps. Its purpose is to explain and promote to potential investors the benefits of investing in micro cap ... [read more]
Looking For A Newsletter Writer We are looking for someone to write a weekly newsletter for our e-zine. Our e-zine is based on business opportunities, home businesses, work from home ... [read more]
The client is always right.. Yeah, right. I hear this preposterous statement all the time, coming from so many desperate copywriters or marketers who would bend over backwards to ingratiate ... [read more]
After 3 years in business and dozens of sales letters I think I've gone as far as I can with the format (which isn't nearly far enough!). I've hired at ... [read more]
A search didn't return any results, so I thought I would ask here, in case anyone has split tested this. How does the conversion rate of a site change by ... [read more]
Hi everyone, Am writing an article about copywriting secrets. Please critique my title. As a thank you for your valuable input, I've contracted with the virtual home-made chocolate chip cookie ... [read more]
Just wondering if anyone has purchased this product from Clayton Makepeace. The product name is The Ultimate Desktop Copy Coach. If so would you recommend it and why do you ... [read more]
Sport Supplement Secrets Please let me know opinions good and bad....Let me have it!
Not that this is new to copywriters but just thought I'd share this short article (from Harvard Business) about stories for those aiming to influence. How a 2-Minute Story Helps ... [read more]
Hey Warriors, I can't decide which headline is best, please share opinions.. Company: Mastermind Marketing Theme: Mindset and Marketing Combined Information product Headlines: 1. Flip the switch on your marketing ... [read more]
Just wanted some feedback from copywriters on something I've noticed on email copywriting. In response email (especially autoresponders), on many occasions, the subject line always contains the name of the ... [read more]
Hi I have often seen the importance of plugging into feelings and showing the potential buyer how best to feel, through my background in hypnosis i find it quite easy ... [read more]
I posted a thread asking for a review on a sales page for an informational product and was delighted with the constructive criticism and advice that came back. Dare I ... [read more]
I need testomonials. I know everyone usually posts up in the top bit.. The "Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum" althouh I think it might be best to in here and ... [read more]
I have just finished working on an informational product and sales page and would appreciate a critique on the copy. I look forward to all constructive criticism. Thank You I ... [read more]
Hi everyone, I'm a little afraid to ask for help here after reading this post: http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...ique-rant.html But I could really use some help on my page... keep in mind that ... [read more]
Bruce Wedding posted this over at his forum, but I thought it was something every copywriter needs to read so I'm reposting the quote here. Cut out all those exclamation ... [read more]
If you are like me meaning that you write your own copy, you may benefit from these guidelines that I have used for all of my products and which will ... [read more]
Now I review a ton of copy both for my students and for free in this forum. There's one common mistake I see repeatedly that can easily be avoided. Now ... [read more]
Hi All, I'm not much for hype, and my Sales Page is not long, either. (Note: Revised Sales Page from 8/3/09). My sales page is for a software application I ... [read more]