Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 
2nd August 2014, 12:36 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
8th April 2014, 12:06 PM
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Replies: 63
Views: 3,534  Re: Helping a homeless guy out...
Hey Mark... you might want to tell the story of transformation that's already happened.
How by his action and intention of sitting down to write and finish his book... the coffee shop is rallying...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th April 2014, 07:13 AM
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Replies: 63
Views: 3,534 Re: Helping a homeless guy out...
This is very cool Mark.
If you create a blog, you might want to use Culture | Tumblr (http://www.tumblr.com/spotlight/culture) as a platform to get traffic and social media that sh*t up.
I...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th September 2013, 01:41 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 490 Quiz Squeeze Page Script That Works With Mobile?
I've been seeing quiz squeeze pages more and more on Facebook. These are basically pages where you ask multiple choice questions to warm the traffic up before you get to the opt-in.
Does anyone...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th January 2013, 07:48 AM
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Replies: 32
Views: 1,313 |
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2013, 09:02 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 918 Killer Makes Bread (Damaging Admission Inside)
I was browsing Reddit this morning and came across this
picture of a loaf of bread...
A Loaf Of Bread (http://i.imgur.com/e3fiS.jpg)
Only... it's not any ordinary bread.
It's made by a...
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Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You
5th September 2012, 12:38 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 628 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th July 2012, 08:54 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,115 |
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Forum: Copywriting
16th June 2012, 11:41 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 902 Re: Life story in sales copy!?
Think in terms of how who you are... helps you SELL.
A story about a visit to the hospital and nearly losing everything for a weight loss product can help you. Not just because it helps connect...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th May 2012, 12:42 PM
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Replies: 39
Views: 1,458 |
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Forum: Copywriting
1st April 2012, 04:06 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 938 Re: First CB product would like Honest reviews..
You've got a lot more work to do. Not because what you've done so far is that bad. But... because this is an ultra-competitive market. You're not where you need to be yet.
Here are some notes:
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Forum: Copywriting
21st March 2012, 02:14 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 768 Re: What Would You Do If...
>>> What would you do?
Yep... listen to Daniel.
Something else is when you're just getting started...
You don't have to wait for clients to come to you... you can go to them.
Contact up...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th March 2012, 07:06 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,350 Re: Sales letter from Heaven? or Hell!
Hi Sev,
A big note for you...
You need to work on crafting a better offer... what it is that you're going to give the prospect when he/she responds to your letter.
For instance, your offer...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th March 2012, 07:26 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,079 |
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd February 2012, 03:43 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 851 Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?
Hi Melanie...
You're on the right track. But, here are some notes for you to make your sales copy even better...
First... the biggest objection you face is... "I can't do it." Your target...
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Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings
23rd January 2012, 01:51 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 11,136 Re: mobile money bandit
Inside the members area, Justin has a list of around 20 affiliate networks for just U.S. affiliates and a second list of about 15 affiliate networks that people in other countries can apply to.
...
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Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings
12th January 2012, 02:27 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 11,136 Re: mobile money bandit
>>> How do you get traffic to your number? Is this all about paid traffic?
There's a free section where he gives away 11 free promotion tactics. Justin recommends that section if you have less...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd November 2011, 02:51 PM
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Replies: 182
Views: 11,667 |
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd November 2011, 09:09 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 817 |
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Forum: Copywriting
17th November 2011, 10:35 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 953 Re: Please Tell Me Why This Sucks
Hi Steve,
You really need to go through each sentence and see how you can cut out words and simplify each sentence. Short sentences are your friend.
Other than that... your benefits are very...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
17th November 2011, 10:20 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 1,960 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
17th November 2011, 09:42 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 656 Re: Im looking to buy PLR whats the best niche ?
Well... most PLR, unchanged from its original form, is virtually worthless no matter the niche.
This is because it's normally poorly devised, not well written, and anybody can swoop in and sell...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th November 2011, 09:51 PM
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Replies: 37
Views: 907 Re: Would my site convert you, and if not, why?
Better than a generic review site...
Explain who you are, your testing criteria, and give a reason why you decided to reveiw autoresponder deliver service. Moreover... simplify your conclusions....
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th November 2011, 02:10 PM
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Replies: 55
Views: 1,953 Re: Staying motivated while writing an ebook?
Here are some tips to help you overcome writer's block:
* Do more research. Find interesting facts/case-studies/stories that bring home your points.
* Create an outline and constantly return...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th November 2011, 01:44 PM
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Replies: 75
Views: 4,631 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th November 2011, 01:38 PM
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Replies: 30
Views: 785 Re: I cant get my website to convert
You've already received lots of comments on your design. But... when you get that solved, you still have a lot of work to do fine-tuning your pitch.
Here are some notes regarding the copy:
*...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th November 2011, 08:43 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 657 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th November 2011, 02:50 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 620 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th November 2011, 06:02 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,461 Re: E-Book Pricing Strategy?
A high-bounce or drop off rate doesn't tell you the whole story. You've got to look at how much money you're taking home at the end of the day. For instance...
Let's say you get 10 out of 100 to...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th October 2011, 08:33 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 755 Re: This may be a sneaky sales page...
Hi Jack...
Here are some notes.
* I'd rewrite your opt-in form headline. I'm not sure "Cookie cutter" aspect doesn't really does it. Dig a little deeper. What's the benefit of not having...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd October 2011, 08:08 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 898 Re: My first Opt-In Copy page
Hi Diana,
Ashley is right. The sample headers you have are pretty bad.
So... first thing I'd do is remove them.
The second thing is you need to spend some money to get better background...
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Forum: Copywriting
20th September 2011, 12:49 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,147 Re: 7 Facts you didn't know ...
Gary Halbert had a good issue on how to incorporate odd facts into the intro of your copy:
The Gary Halbert Letter (http://www.thegaryhalbertletter.com/Newsletters/zaza_interesting_facts.htm)
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Forum: Copywriting
12th September 2011, 07:15 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,057 Re: Is "Copywriting" Unethical When Used on Kids?
I think the better approach may be to create the review site
for parents looking to buy their kids the toy.
I suspect you may find it's a really hard sale to get money out
of someone without a...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th September 2011, 10:14 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 919 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
31st August 2011, 08:36 AM
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Replies: 34
Views: 1,515 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
31st August 2011, 08:03 AM
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Replies: 179
Views: 8,171 Re: Goodbye Clickbank
There typically are a few percentage points of refunds in certain niches on Clickbank from "Instant refunders" who know about the lax refund policy.
However... this is normally a nominal amount. ...
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Forum: Copywriting
30th August 2011, 06:49 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,226 |
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Forum: Copywriting
15th August 2011, 12:42 PM
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Replies: 40
Views: 1,723 Re: Do I need to fire this copywriter?
I hate to say it. I would love to be supportive of whoever wrote this.
But I don't think this piece isn't salvageable without a complete rewrite.
The entire premise of "Mental weight loss" is a...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
10th August 2011, 03:06 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 738 Re: CB affiliates — what's your conversion rate?
Conversion rates don't mean much.
.02% conversion rate can be very profitable if the traffic free... or cheap enough.
Or... if you have a profitable backend.
Moreover... a 50% conversion can...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
10th August 2011, 11:40 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 2,022 Re: How to Write a letter to Affiliates
Explain why this opportunity is worth their time.
Here are some questions you might answer for them:
* Why is your offer going to make them money?
* Why are people going to want this?
* Why...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
10th August 2011, 11:04 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 1,006 Re: Webinar Overload
Well... most of the time a webinar is there to pitch you something.
So... they overload you with information... make everything sound so complicated... and then hit you with a solution (or...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th August 2011, 09:09 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 935 Re: I Don't Know What I'm Doing Wrong?
Hi Matt,
A couple of notes:
* Why is keyword research important?
You say, "you show how to find the best keywords"... but how are they the "Best?"
Get more specific...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th August 2011, 11:38 AM
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Replies: 31
Views: 1,329 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th August 2011, 07:07 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 544 Re: how to get the most bang for my buck?
Well... you don't know how targeted a site is, until you actually start running ads.
So... if you book an ad for an entire year... that's probably not a good idea.
On the other hand, with...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th August 2011, 01:13 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 875 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th August 2011, 08:24 AM
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Replies: 65
Views: 2,290 Re: Beginner: Earnings claims - Real?
In my experience.. the guys who are really making what they claim (and are truthful about how they really made it)... aren't the guys relentlessly throwing the numbers around.
When you really have...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th August 2011, 08:16 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 1,793 Re: Can article writing be a career
Well... it depends what you're offering to the client.
The thing about writing is... it's tiring. You don't take breaks and it makes your brain hurt.
So.. you might be able to really create a...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th August 2011, 07:48 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,017 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th August 2011, 08:16 PM
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Replies: 105
Views: 4,906 Re: Can You Make money online with no website?
If not having a website is stopping you from getting started... then you don't need one. As others have mentioned, there are lots of way to make a few bucks here and there.
However... if you're...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th August 2011, 11:33 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 566 Re: A/B Split Tests
The easiest way to get started is a tool provided by Google: http://www.google.com/websiteoptimizer
The main things you need to watch out for are:
1. Making sure you've received enough traffic...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th August 2011, 11:12 AM
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Replies: 53
Views: 3,697 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th August 2011, 09:36 AM
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Replies: 55
Views: 1,894 Re: Low cost or free methods to drive traffic
Hi Wyatt...
I used to run a blog with your topic... and I used a technique that worked really well.
It won't work for all niche markets. But it works for yours because your content is...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th August 2011, 10:49 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 440 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th August 2011, 10:25 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 522 Re: What is my writing worth?
What will your services do for a client?
Will it...
* Stir controversy and get passed around?
* Pre-sell his products and services?
* Generate organic backlinks?
* Get read and build an...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th August 2011, 09:32 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,438 |
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 08:22 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 963 Re: My First Copywriting Attempt!
Hi John...
Far more important than what the copy says... is how you're positioning yourself.
Give yourself a pay raise... and don't call yourself another "Article writer."
Look around in the...
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